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Bac/Mythes et héros

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Mythes/Heros
I'm going to speak about the notion Mythes and heros. At first I would like to give definitions of the hero, a hero is a person who can be admired ou rejected by people or a society, they could from to hitory like cowboy, knights, president...They could be bad or good, of course you have bad people who can be considered like hereos for exemple Mafia Boss, gangster who are usually created by movie like Scarface, The gold Father... And the good people like wars Hereos, a person who have save a life...
And the Myths are traditionnally so odl you cannot track them back, they could represent a pilar of society like pioneer in USA.
We can wonder how That is whoever made a person or a movement become heroes or myths?
So we gone to see this into different social mouvement, the manifest destiny and the push west with the pioneer, cowboys and indians who have forged the american socity, the swinging the social brtish revolution ans a exemple of person who have fled the technologies.
I think a persone could be considred like hereos for this action and his temper who are diffrent from others, like we can see in the document BROKEN DREAMS with the pioneers because they were courageous men who went in hostiles areas to find a better life. In this situation we can said they are a hereos because they do something that another can't do, or the exemple of the PONY EXPRESS who a young men go with horse to give letter, we can considered them like heroes because it was very hard work, because the could be attaked by indians, snakes...
After a hereos is a person who have tooked forward the company, like in england were a lot of people have contribute to changing society like we can see in the document THE TIME ARE CHANGING we talk about « hero boom » with the beatles, the english football, the Stones...They particped to changes the strict british society they have they brought a loosening social, sexual...And have reported this strict society. And we have people who in future could be donsidered like heroes for exemple in the document A MAN IN FRONT OF HIS YURT because we have a man who dicided to not live whith technologie, and the modern life and maybe this man could be a hero for the next generation.
And for a myth, I think the myth are based on Stereotypes like in the document OUR WESTERN ROOTS with the Cowboys who(which) leaves to the sunrise of the sun.
The myths are for me a pillar for society, america is a good exemple because their temper and culture are based on the myth of push west and pioneers.
The myths are like a model and motivated people like the americans dreams who have push a lot of people in USA ans have participed to make the power of USA or the Manifest destiny who hace motivated a lot of people to go to west like we see in MANIFEST DESTINY.
To conclude as we see Hero and Myths are pillar for society, and have to influence people, socity.
A Person could be considered like heroe because he is different from other people, he is a model for all. And myth influenced socity..


Sagot :

I'm going to speak about the notion "Myths and heroes". At first I would like to give the definition of the term hero: a hero is a person who is admired or rejected by people or a society, they could be historical like cowboys, knights, president...(the ellipses used to put a pause, suspense and so on..look up the use)They could be bad or good, of course you have bad people who can be considered heroes for example the Mafia Boss, gangsters who are usually created by movies like Scarface, 'The God Father'... And the good people like heroes in/of wars , a person who have save a life (a person who saved lives) ...
And the Myths are traditionally old stories, so old you could probably not be able to track them back, they could represent a pillar of society like the pioneer in USA.
We can wonder how That (names of people or places are the words that start with capital letters in a sentence) is whoever made a person or a movement become heroes or myths?
So we gone (we are going) to see this in two different social movement, the manifest destiny and the push west with the pioneer, cowboys and Indians (names of people start with a capital letter) who have forged the american society, the swinging the social British revolution and an example of person who have fled the technologies Revise this paragraph...it has clear meaning.
I think a person could be considered a hero for this action and his temper who are different from others (a hero could be a person who is different from others in terms of his/her actions and character., like we can see in the document "BROKEN DREAMS" with the pioneers because they were courageous men who went in hostile areas to find a better life. In this situation we can said they are a hereos because they do something that another can't do (there is mix up of tense....they are referred to as heroes because they ventured into a journey that others could not undertake), or the example of the "PONY EXPRESS" (using quotation marks is enough, no need of capitalizing the words)who a young men go with horse to give letter, we can considered them like heroes because it was very hard work, because the could be attacked by Indians, snakes...
(they were considered heroes as they went up to deliver a letter without fear of snake or the Indians that could attack them)(use of ellipses; for pause, suspense,..look up the different uses and when referring to a list that is not exhaustive but  in writing using conjunctions is preferred )After (Also) a hero cab be a person who have took forward a company, like in England where a lot of people have contributed to changing the society like we can see in the document THE TIME ARE CHANGING we talk about "hero boom" with the Beatles, the English football, the Stones...(and many others)They participated in changing the strict British society and they brought in a loosening community in terms of the social, sexual interactions, just to mention a few...And have reported this strict society. And we have people who in future (presently or currently) could be considered heroes for example in the document A MAN IN FRONT OF HIS YURT because we have a man who decided not to live with technologies, and the modern life (full stop) maybe this man could be a hero for the next generation.
And for myths, I think the myth are based on Stereotypes like in the document OUR WESTERN ROOTS with the Cowboys who (which) leaves to the sunrise of the sun.
The myths are for me a pillar for society, America is a good example because their temper and culture are based on the myth of push west and pioneers.
The myths are models that motivate dreams such as the American dream which has pushed a lot of people in USA and has played a major role in the power of the USA. It as motivated a lot of people to go to the west like we see in MANIFEST DESTINY .
To conclude as we see Hero and Myths are pillar for society and can influence people or society in general.
A Person could be considered  hero because he is different from other people and a model for all. And myths influenced society (repetition)..
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