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in my life,
I have been in Spain, Germany and China.
In Spain, I have visited Barcelona and Madrid.
In Barcelona, I have visited the Sagrada familia. I have took lots of pictures and I bought souvenirs. I remember when i have visited the Sagrada Familia, I felt very happy because, I was with my best friend and we laugh a lot. My best friend posted the pictures on Instagram. This day was perfect. Personnaly, I find that Spain is the most beautiful contry.

In Germany, I have visited Berlin.
I have seen the Berlin wall, I have walked in Brandebourg.I remember when i have seen the Berlin wall. I felt angry because i did not saw this wall. I was with my father and he told me the story of this wall. This day was boring for me. Berlin is the moste beautiful city but the Berlin wall is the veriest boring experience.

In China, I have visited Shangai.
I have been in the jardin Yuguan, I have seen Jin Mao Tower and I ate the chinese speciality. I remember when I ate the chinese speciality. I felt happy because I was with my friends. We ate a lot of speciality chinese and we have had a stromach ache. The chinese food is the must goo for me and my friends

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in my life,
I have been to Spain, Germany and China.
In Spain, I visited Barcelona and Madrid.
In Barcelona, I  visited the Sagrada familia. I took lots of pictures and I bought souvenirs. I remember when i had visited the Sagrada Familia, I felt very happy because, I was with my best friend and we laughed a lot. My best friend posted the pictures on Instagram. That day was perfect. Personally, I find that Spain is the most beautiful country.

In Germany, I visited Berlin.
I saw the Berlin wall, I walked in Brandebourg.I remember when I saw the Berlin wall. I felt angry because i did not see that wall when it was still there. I was with my father and he told me the story of this famous wall. That day was boring for me. Berlin is the most beautiful city but the Berlin wall is the most boring experience.

In China, I also visited Shanghai.
I visited the garden Yuguan, I saw Jin Mao Tower and I still remember when ate the Chinese specialty food. I felt happy because I was with my friends. We ate a lot of Chinese food  and we had a stromach ache because of all that food. The chinese food was the best kind of food we had tasted yet with my friends.

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