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Pouvez vous m'aider a corrigé mes fautes d'anglais please

I was with my friends in the forest to go camping, everything was cool, however i took the bad path but when i realized i didn't took the same path than my friends it was too late. Then i continued my way alone. But when the night fell i was really scared because there is lot of weird noise the creakings branches, the wolf's cry, the thunder , i continued walking more quickly in hope of find my friends or somewhere to sleep. When at midnight i found a little house, to be honest a little castle i was satisfied but the door was open the castle seemed abandoned then i entered I felt safely. it was just a feeling because there is lot of noise inside and when i found a ghost i ran in all the castle until be blocked in a torture chamber with the ghost. She asked me if i came for the sacrifice I couldn't give a reply because i was too afraid. She tried to kill me. Fortunately for me I woke up on the back of my friend who found me. But for me it was not just a dream.

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-to go to the camping
-then my friends
-I continued on my way
-fell down
-of weird noises like ... the wolf's scream.
-I continued to walk but more quickly with the hope to finf my friends
- At midnight I found a little house , actually it was a little castle and I was satisfied
-I felt safe. But it was just a feeling because there were lots of noises inside. So I walked and saw a ghost! So I ran ... until I get blocked .. with him.
-If I came here to sacrifice myself but I couldn't
-After that she tried to kill me
- But at the moment she was really going to, fortunately for me ... I woke up near to my friend sleeping ! I was actually dreaming but for me it was not a dream...
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