Bonjour,
Consigne: Inventer une histoire qui doit faire peur, entre 150 et 200 mot. En utilisant tous les temps du passé et 2 ou 3 connecteurs logique.
Voici mon travail je voudrais savoir s'il y'a des faute ?
merci.
During a stormy night of 19th century, old men went to sleep around one in the morning after listening a radio. When a strange little girl knocked at the door. She was dressed in a white dress, she had long blond hair. The man asked her why is she hanging out at this time. She did not answer him. He then asked her if she wanted to drink or eat. But she replied by a nod and left. The next day, at same hours, the strange little girl came home the old man. He asked her the same as the day before and the girl has acted the same way that the previous day. Then she disappeared, which is odd… The next night he was not surprised that the girl had come back. he invited him to stay for the night and to her surprise, she agreed. But this night the man found no sleep he rose for listen the radio. misfortune came, a police message cut the music. The message was : « Attention all, we inform you that a strange little girl walks in the city. She is dressed in white dress and has long blonde hair, she has red eyes. She was last seen in before a large black house. If you have seen this girl do not talked with her. And does not invited especially not at home. It's a serial killer. It's a ghost, yes, because she died there two years and she has returned for revenge. This girl did not a heart she is cruel and ruthless. be careful ! » Then the old man turned to see if the girl was still asleep and saw her standing there nodding arm. The man fell dead. The legend says that when you are going to spend the night in this home, it is important not to think of the little girl with red eyes, otherwise, she will return during the night for you murder...