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Bonjour svp pouvez -vous m'aider rapidement ? Je dois corrigé une rédaction en anglais en faisant attention au verbe au passé et apportant les modifications nécessaires et meme rajouter des phrases :
Friday 6th june was the best holidays. It was onze typical day. I went to visit Ibiza. I was going to ibiza with my friends and my parents. Frits I was going to ate with my parents in the hotel. Second, I went to the beach although the sun . I was very tanned on the beach. At three p.m we ate in a very good fast food restaurent . Durring the visit I had very much present but it was very cost . My Dreamt it was became reality. Every people were happy and they did a must big party in the world. There was people from all countries. Around a summing-pool there was a crowd .

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Je suis américaine donc jai tous corrigé : On Friday the 6th of June , I had the best holiday. It wasn't a typical day . I went to Ibiza with my friends and parents . When we got there we ate in the hotel then we went to the beach . In the afternoon , near 3pm , we ate in a very good restaurant . This holiday was fun , I got lots of presents , my dream became reality . Everyone was happy , we had the biggest party , there was people from all countries . It was awesome , we also had a swimming pool . I loved my holidays
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