J'ai fait la même chose mais les deux personnages ne sont pas utilisés et je n'ai pas utilisé le prétérit Be + V-ing...
I stared the dtrange form. Tha clound faded. It wasn't a monster but a giant pink seahorse. He wasn't a monster. He was shonning, he was beautiful and he looked really nice. I was happy that it wasn't a monster. He wasn't alone. I saw behind him others giant seahorses. They were all in a different color, one blue, one green, on yellow... They were all so beautiful. The pink came near to me and asked me to ride on his back. We explored magnificent places, the most wonderful places of the sea. Poor Chloe, she wanted to stay on the beach...
