Bonjour, pouvez-vous corriger mon poème sur l'Irlande ?
Je suis pas contre quelques améliorations comme des rimes...

Merci


Ireland, writers’ earth ,
Where the most famous grew, wrote.
There are these huge green valleys,
Where quietness and peace reign,
Wich inspire us, wich help us.

The lakes of Connemara,
Place adored by Irish.
They are so much glittering,
That we can see itself inside,
As if it was a mirror.

Everyweek, Everyday,
In Limerick or Galway,
In the street, in the bars,
A festive atmosphere resounds.

This magnificent island
Offer majestic landscapes,
Of greenery as far as the eye can see.
Mountains, rivers, beaches...

The place to be