bonjour !
ton nom et ton adresse tu dois les mettre en haut à droite
Roro Zorro
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Dear Madam
I am very interseting in your job announcement for babysitting .
I am fourteen (?) years old and I am a student at xx High School.
I already have some experiences with children as I am the oldest of a four children family. My younger sister (brother) is three years old. So since I was ten, I've been used to take care of my sisters and brothers.
I've also babysitted a baby girl over the last year to have some pocket money. Eveything has been really allright ; the mother has even asked me if I could still come from time to time for the next two years.
I'm intesting in this job because I'm fond of babies and children, I'm very responsible, mature and kind. I love to play with kids and I would like to work in a day nursery later on.
Thank you for your time and attention
Sincerely
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!attention! tu n'es pas obligé(e) de tout mettre; ça ferait trop long (pour l'expérience)
j'espère que tu as compris que c'est point par point (des fois ils te mettent plusieurs exemples pour commencer ex : dear.../to whom it may concern
bonne soirée
