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Bonjour !
Ce temps exprime une action qui était en train de se dérouler lorsqu'une autre action s'est enclenchée.
Tu l'as utilisé plusieurs fois déjà dans ton récit :
" Once upon a time, Regina, a young woman, daughter of the great witch Cora, madly in love with his farmhand, Daniel, but unfortunately promised to the King of the enchanted forest. The king's daughter, Snow White, was very close to Regina and thus come to learn this relationship. She promised to reveal this secret to anyone. Snow White was manipulated by Cora and ends up betraying their secret,furious, Cora found Daniel and snatched his heart.
Regina WAS TALKING with Snow White when she learned the cause of the murder , the girl had betrayed their secret. Regina was forced to marry the king and became the queen of the kingdom. The day came when the pain became hate, she decided to kill the King and his daughter.
Snow White escaped death and was exiled from the kingdom. She found a cottage of seven dwarf who gave shelter until Regina finds and do fall into a deep sleep. With luck , Prince Charming found and saved her. They regained the kingdom , married and Regina drove out of the kingdom.
Snow White and Prince Charming WERE LIVING happily and expecting a baby girl when they heard was going to befall them a curse created by Regina. Soon after , they learned that the only hope of saving them was their daughter , Emma. They then sent to another world where the day of its 28 years , she had to found them and broke the curse.
Regina ends up with the magic necessary for launching the curse. The fate carried almost the entire population of the kingdom in a city located in a world without magic, Storybrooke in our world. The people will forget their past life and happy endings disappear. Time became their prison.
Regina became mayor of the city, and found his happy ending in the misfortune of others. Until the day Emma tracked down his parents and broke the curse. The population returned to the enchanted kingdom and each then found his happy ending. "
Honnêtement, je vois mal comment faire un récit entier avec ce temps.
Donc, ce que tu as fait me semble convenir à la consigne donnée, d'autant que je n'ai pas relevé de fautes.
Voilà !
Bonne soirée !
(si tu as des questions, n'hésite pas)
Ce temps exprime une action qui était en train de se dérouler lorsqu'une autre action s'est enclenchée.
Tu l'as utilisé plusieurs fois déjà dans ton récit :
" Once upon a time, Regina, a young woman, daughter of the great witch Cora, madly in love with his farmhand, Daniel, but unfortunately promised to the King of the enchanted forest. The king's daughter, Snow White, was very close to Regina and thus come to learn this relationship. She promised to reveal this secret to anyone. Snow White was manipulated by Cora and ends up betraying their secret,furious, Cora found Daniel and snatched his heart.
Regina WAS TALKING with Snow White when she learned the cause of the murder , the girl had betrayed their secret. Regina was forced to marry the king and became the queen of the kingdom. The day came when the pain became hate, she decided to kill the King and his daughter.
Snow White escaped death and was exiled from the kingdom. She found a cottage of seven dwarf who gave shelter until Regina finds and do fall into a deep sleep. With luck , Prince Charming found and saved her. They regained the kingdom , married and Regina drove out of the kingdom.
Snow White and Prince Charming WERE LIVING happily and expecting a baby girl when they heard was going to befall them a curse created by Regina. Soon after , they learned that the only hope of saving them was their daughter , Emma. They then sent to another world where the day of its 28 years , she had to found them and broke the curse.
Regina ends up with the magic necessary for launching the curse. The fate carried almost the entire population of the kingdom in a city located in a world without magic, Storybrooke in our world. The people will forget their past life and happy endings disappear. Time became their prison.
Regina became mayor of the city, and found his happy ending in the misfortune of others. Until the day Emma tracked down his parents and broke the curse. The population returned to the enchanted kingdom and each then found his happy ending. "
Honnêtement, je vois mal comment faire un récit entier avec ce temps.
Donc, ce que tu as fait me semble convenir à la consigne donnée, d'autant que je n'ai pas relevé de fautes.
Voilà !
Bonne soirée !
(si tu as des questions, n'hésite pas)
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