ligne 1 : we DATED
l3: a taxi BROUGHT us in our family.
l3: the name of tje family WAS
l4: they were
l6: On tuesdau, we played golf. It was the second time for me. And I loved that.
l7: we had 2 hours. It was very nice.
l8: ON wednesday
l9: it was very big and I didn't like..........
l11: it was very big....... It was my favorite place
l12: it was very short
l13: on friday, it was
l14: I was very tired.....
je crois que tu as oublié que ton texte devait être au passé!! bonne journée! :)