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My name is Jack Splete. I'm a detective

My investigate :
I must solve this case. The victim is Michael Obamas. He had twenty one years old. He was watchman in chief. Michael was killed on the statue of liberty. He was strangled on Friday, November thirteen between six and eight am. This is clues: a bloodstain, fingerprints, footprints, a rope, and a surveillance camera.

I was questioning three suspects.
"- Robin Obamas, where were you between six and eight am this morning? The detective asked. - I was in the Statue of Liberty, because I was working, answered Michael. -Did you see or heard something? Jack said. - I didn't see anything, but I heard Michael leaving around five am. The suspect added. -Good, hummm, Katy Perra, what were you doing this morning? Questioned Jack. -I was doing housework in the Statue of Liberty. I heard someone screaming and I was Robin but it's suspect because Friday his a day of rest. Katy said. -Ok, What about you Jean? Asked Jack. - I was cheek an electric system, I didn't see anything but I heard a door creaking. Declared Jean."

I thought the murderer was Robin Obamas. His alibi's wasn't correct. Katy said " Friday his a day of rest". The Friday, Robin didn't go on the Statue of Liberty, but this morning he was here. And this clues to found corresponding with a fingerprints of Robin.

"-Robin why had you kill your son ? questioning Jack. -Because my dad to name my Michael Chief and not me. Answering Robin"
My college go to in prison
Michael Obamas was killed by his dad Robin Obamas.



Sagot :

Nathea
bonjour !

My name is Jack Spleete. I'm a detective.

My investigation :
I must (have to) solve this case.
 The victim is M.O. . He was twenty-two years old. He was  watchman in chief (ça serait bien que tu dises guardien de quoi;;dans ce cas tu dis "he was the watchman in chief of The Statue of Lberty"par ex. si c'est ça).
Michael was strangled next to (inside) the Statue of Liberty on November, 13th, between 6 and 8 a.m. .
These were the  clues : a bloodstain, fingerprints, footprints, a rope, and a security camera.

I had to question 3 suspects.
"R. O. , where were you betwwen 6 and 8 (soit tu mets juste a.m. , soit tu mets this morning ....)?" asked the detective
."I was inside the Statue, becuase I was working", answered Robin (pas Michael ^^)
 "Did you see or heard anything ?"Jack said. 
"I saw nothing , but I heard Robin leaving around 5 a.m." added the suspect.
" OK, Humm, Miss Katty Perra, what were you doing this morning ?" questioned Jack. 
"I was doing my job, I'm a cleaning lady, inside the Statue. I heard someone screaming and (  I was ??tu as dû te tromper ...) it was Robin. It was suspect, because Friday is his day off" Katty said. 
"Ok, what about you, Jean? " asked Jack.
 "I was checking an electric system, I didn't see anything but I heard a door creaking" declared Jean.

I thought the murderer was R.O.. His alibi wasn't correct (didn't sound  right). Kathy said : "Friday is his day off. On Fridays , Robin doesn't have to come to the Statue of Liberty". But this Friday morning, here he was. 
And his prints were matching with the fingerprints founded on the scene.

"Robin, why have you killed your son ?" asked the detective.
" Because ????? (est-ce que c'est parce qu'on a nommé mon fils chef et pas moi" ???? my son had been named chief  instead of me." confessed Robin. 
????????= My colleague took him to prison.
Michael Obamas had been killed by his dad Robin.



voilà. J'ai fait de mon mieux.J'espère ne pas m'être embrouillé trop dans les personnages ^^^^

bonne fin de week end

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