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WRITTEN EXPRESSION.


I am writing to talk about the scene in WhiteChapel.
First of all, I am a policeman.
After work at midnight, I saw a man, he was running very quickly.
That day, I had finished quite late.
This man was dressed all in black that is to say, the coat, jacket, trousers and also accessories. He was very strange and mysterious.
The atmosphere was gloomy and dangerous.
A few minutes later, I discovered the body of woman on the floor.
Without losing a second I called the
The woman was in poor condition.
This woman was dead beause she was not breathing.
I think she has been stabbed by a murderer.
Without losing a second I called the ambulance
Suddently next to this woman, I had found an identity card.
I was surprised because the identity card was probably the killer.

it was written:
name: Jack
Sex: M
size: 1,82
Date of birth: 08/05/1988
Job: surgeon
Nationality: English
number of children: 3
Annual salary: $ 25 M/ year

This man might be the murderer because his job was surgeon.
He must be rich.
But, he may do an organ’s traffic.
The next day with my colleagues we have been researching this killer.
We had finally found him in his office.
He will certainly have fifteen years in prison for harassment.