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Bounjour, je suis en 3ème et pour demain, j'ai un orale d'anglais ou je dois présenter mon film préféré. Pourriez-vous me le corriger? Merci d'avance.



The movie Avatar is one of my favourit film. The film was made and produced by James Cameron.
The story takes place in a laboratory. Jake is a former soldier. He is meant to replace his twin brother on the Andora planet. An oil company takes advantage of the mines on Andora. An important mine is under a very old tree. A tribe called the Navi lives here. Jake and others persons are transformed in Navi's. Jake's mission will be to understand how this tribe lives and to get eventually the mine.

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The movie Avatar is one of my favorite films. The film was made and produced by James Cameron.

The story takes place in a laboratory. Jake is a former soldier. He is meant to replace his twin brother on the Andora planet. An oil company takes advantage of the mines on Andora. An important mine is under a very old tree. A tribe called the Navi lives here. Jake and other people are transformed in Navi's. Jake's mission will be to understand how this tribe lives and to get eventually the mine.

(Peut être préciser ton avis?)
Hello!

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favorite
 The main character Jake, is a former soldier...
'takes advantage of"- que veux tu dire? 

Il faut utiliser des mots comme,  then, one day, eventually, 

Jake and others are transformed into Navis

Later in the film (or at the end of the film) Jake's mission is to understand how the tribe lives and how to retrieve the mine (or take over the mine ).

J'esperre que ca vous aide.  Il faudrait plus d'adjectives ? 

Good luck!

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