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Last year, I went with my family to Morocco. It’s my favorite country, because it's my origin country.
We booked in a Hotel in Tanger, a hotel face to the sea.

The first week we decided to spend our time sunbathing on the beach.
It was so lovely. Every day we stayed late in bed and after a big brunch we wasted time on the beautiful and warm sand or diving in the hotel swimming pool. But after a while we were tired of doing nothing so we went sightseeing and shopping. It was marvellous. People there are like the sun of their country; so warm and so welcoming.!
After a long day visiting the city, we returned to the hotel. I will never forget these morrocan holidays.
We really felt we were on HOLIDAY!!!!!

Merci d'avance, c'est pour mon exam..

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Crystal2016
Bonjour,
J'ai trouvé plusieurs erreurs:
Last year, I went with my family to Morocco. It’s my favorite country, because my family was born there.
We booked in (take «in» off) a Hotel in Tanger, a hotel faced to the sea.

The first week we decided to spend our time sunbathing on the beach.
It was so lovely. Every day we stayed late in bed and after a big brunch, we wasted time on the beautiful and warm sand or diving in the hotel swimming pool. But after a while we were tired of doing nothing so we went sightseeing and shopping. It was marvellous. People over there are like the sun of their country; so warm and so welcoming!
After a long day visiting the city, we returned to the hotel. I will never forget these moroccan holidays.
We really felt like if we were on a HOLIDAY!!!!!

Zacharyvanier
Bonjour,

Last year, I went with my family to Morocco. It’s my favorite country, because my family was born there. We booked in a Hotel in Tanger, a hotel faced to the sea.

The first week we decided to spend our time sunbathing on the beach.
It was so lovely. Every day we stayed late in bed and after a big brunch, we wasted time on the beautiful and warm sand or diving in the hotel swimming pool. But after a while we were tired of doing nothing so we went sightseeing and shopping. It was marvellous. People over there are like the sun of their country; so warm and so welcoming!

After a long day visiting the city, we returned to the hotel. I will never forget these moroccan holidays.

We really felt like if we were on a holiday!

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