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My name is Maëlle . I'm fifteen years old. I was born on the 4th of November. I have one brother and one sister. I live in Nantes. I practise dance in a club. I hate reading and mathematics. I don't have favourite style of music but my favourite movie is “Titanic”, and I love series such as Grey's Anatomy. I like when my best friend is a little crazy and I hate when not laugh because it means it is sad... I love watch life of star and saw my friends and go shopping. Most of the time in weekend, I stay at home or watch my family and my friends. I wake at 5:45 when there school and I take bus at 6h45. I keen on Ice Tea and chips! I don't mind video games and my favourite Apps is Facebook because I can bet my friends. My two favourite school subjects is English and History and Geography.

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KeepYourEyesPeeled
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My name is Maëlle. I'm fifteen years old. I was born on the 4th of November. I have one brother and one sister. I live in Nantes. I practise dance in a club. I hate reading and mathematics. I don't have a favourite style of music but my favourite movie is “Titanic”, and I love series such as Grey's Anatomy. I like when my best friend is a little crazy and I hate it when we are laughing because it means it is sad... I love to watch life of star and to see my friends and love to go shopping. Most of the time in weekend, I stay at home or watch my family and my friends. I woke up at 5:45 when there's school and I take the bus at 6h45. I am keen on Ice Tea and chips! I don't mind video games and my favourite app is Facebook because I can contact my friends. My two favourite school subjects are English and History and Geography. 
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1.i hate when she/he don't laugh because it means he/she is sad 2.i love watching life of star,saw my friends and going shopping.(il faut ma mettre deux and et en met virgule a la place de and)
3.my favourite apps is facebook because i can chat with my friends or post photos.
4. My three favourite school subjects are englsh 

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