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Bonjour, pour mon cours d'anglais j'ai du écrire une expression écrite. J'ai du dire le pour et le contre des avancées médicales j'aurais voulu savoir si j'ai fait des fautes cordialement,
Technology helps us to have a life easier by improving medicine. Rapid medical advances, overwhelm us in our daily lives and are needed in any place that we find have many advantages and disadvantages.
On the one hand, advances in medicine make the quality of life better. The advances in medicine allow saving people from diseases nowadays incurable with the creation of treatments or improvement.Thanks to medical advances we extend our life expectancy in better living conditions. Indeed treatments can cure always more diseases. Furthermore the medicine can also do amazing things like choosing the physical characteristics of the future baby like hair color, eyes color and more...
On the other hand, if we increase the life expectancy, the population on earth will be enormous and impossible (insufficient resources). And life will quickly become complicated. Moreover, to have these medical advances must be tested, and test it on people who have no hope, people who just want to avoid suffering from but the keep alive to see if the medication makes its job. And finally, nothing will be natural if we begin to touch on genetics to choose the hair color of her future baby, that is the nature of doing choices only of the nature.
To my mind and as a conclusion, it can help and make life easier for many people in different ways, however we must let nature do what it has to do.
je vais te mettre toute les fautes que je remarques *an easier life . Je comprends pas ce que tu veux dire par "are needed in any place that we find have many advantages and disadvantages." *L.6: improvements *L.12: Moreover, these medical advances have to be tested, more often on hopeless people *L.15: by choosing
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