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bonsoir qui peut vérifier ce paragraphe que j'ai écrit et surtout les formules et la structure des phrases svp merci d'avance

Hello my name is aya I live in the Morroco , I study in the 3rd year college, I have a single sister called racha, my favorite subject is math, I spend the plupard of my time doing my homework , I like to travel generally to the cities where there is the beach, in the holidays I spend my time listening to music, I like relaxing music, my favorite colors are pink black and especially red, I like to practice sport,Morally , I'm helpful , kind a and lovely : that's what my friends tell me every time . My favourite singer is beyoncé and for food , I like ..pizza In my free time I prefer to listen to music and to chatt with my friends. Besides , I love to wear aclassic clothes. , I'm- medium tall ) , I have a - brown and curly - hair .
I do my best I hope you like it

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Angelique21220
Hello, my name is Aya. I live in Morroco. I studied at the college for 3 years. (tu voulais bien dire que tu étudies au collège depuis 3 ans?). I have one sister who called Racha. 
My favorite subject is math 
I spend a lot of time on my homework. 
I like travel in the cities where there is the beach. 
During the holidays, I spend my time listening to music. 
I like relaxing music. 
My favorite colors are pink, black, and especially red. 
I like to do sports. 
I'm helpful kind and lovely, that's what my friends tell me every time. 
My favorite singer is Beyoncé and my favorite food is pizza. 
In my free time, I prefer to listen to music and chat with my friends. 
Besides, I love wearing aclassic clothes. 
I'm average height. 
I have brown and curly hair. 
I do my best and I hope you like it ! 

J'ai réécris ton texte en corrigeant toutes les fautes et en rectifiant tes phrases pour qu'elles ai un sens ! J'éspère que je t'aurais aidé ! :) 

Nathea
bonjour

Hello
My name is Aya and I live in Morroco. I am in 9th grade in high school (en calcul anglais).I only have a sister, Racha.
My favourite subject is maths and I spend most of my time doing my homework.
I enjoy travelling, specially in places with the sea and nice beaches. During my holidays I like listening to music; my favourite singer is Beyonce. I love to wear clothes pink, black and especially red but quite classic
I love practicing sports.My friends have always told me I was helpful, kind and lovely.. I enjoy chatting with them
Of course , I'll never say know to eat a pizza !!
Physically, I'm medium-tall and i have got curly brown hair 

je t'ai un peu ré-organisé ton texte et corrigé les fautes.

Bonne soirée :)

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