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I will tell you about the animal persecution in the world
Every year in the world, humans kill many animals , Some are even species in extinction.
More than one hundred and forty billion animals are killed to be eaten in the world each year.
In order to become rich some criminal kill species such as the rhinoceros and yet It is forbidden by the law.
In spite of laws, the number of animals kill illegally do not drop.
As for me I want these murders to cease !
We should together stop this carnage , Otherwise it will only get worse !
Would you like to be stalking in this way ?
It seems to me that no , It seems to me that no
Thank you for your attention

Sagot :

I will tell you about the animal persecution in the world
Every year, humans kill many animals. Some species are soon going to be extinct.
More than one hundred and forty billion animals are killed to be eaten in the world each year.
In order to become rich some criminals kill species such as rhinoceros and although it is forbidden by the law.
Even if laws were made, the number of animals killed illegally is not decreasing.
In my opinion, I want these murders to stop immediately ! 
We should all try and stop this.  Otherwise it will only get worse !
Would you like to see all of these animals dissapear!
I believe not, so speak up and stop this cruelty!
Thank you for your attention.
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