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Bonsoir, QQ pourrait-il me corriger les fautes d'orthographe et les expressions qui ne se disent pas de ma lettre de motivation svp??
Merci

Dear Sir or Madam,

I write you to announce my wish to enter the english european section of the next year.

Indeed, this section allows to:
•accentuate the learning of the english language. English is the universal language and its mastery is essential in the professional life just like private life.
•Use English in scientific subjects (mathematics and physics). Wishing to practice a job in the scientific field (medicine, engineer), it seems to me indispensable to master the scientific vocabulary. Indeed, the convention are in English and the best university are located in the USA and in England.
•Deal with the knowledge of the Anglo-Saxon culture in depth. Being attracted by the British culture (music, cinema), I think important to realize this knowledge by a trip abroad.
To conclude, studies abroad seems primordial to my career development and this european section is, in my view, the best way to prepare.

My experience in regard to English (many trips, 4 summer camps in total immersion in England then in USA) allow me, I think, to join this european class. Moreover, I am a hard-working and conscientious student; I am ready to supply the necessary work to be at the level.
Yours faithfully, Matthieu Schmitz


Sagot :

Tati14
 Bonjour,

To enter in/to the english european

Just like private life tu peut juste dire : Like the private life

the best university are located in the USA and in England. (Il y a d'autres pays anglophones qui pourraient être consernés)

I think IT IS important (mieux de mettre le IT IS)

Sinon c'est très bien je trouve!

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