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Bonjour. je suis en 4° et j'aimerais bien qu on corrige ma rédaction d'anglais, en me disant les fautes de conjugaison ou de vocabulaire et surtout ne vous retenez pas,i dites moi tout ce qui vous gène.

One night, I was walking with my dog named Igor when suddenly I heard something. It

was a highpiched cries coming from somewhere in the alley. I was very terrified

because I couldn't see anything around me. So I hurried to get home with Igo. But

when I arrived in front of the door. I heard a footsteps behind me. I completely freaked

out. I was trying to open the door when I felt somebody touched my shoulder. I turned

and I saw a man. He explained to me that he had lost his key so he wanted me, if he

could wait his wife at home. We went home and he asked me a cup of tea. I had

swiched on the TV in the kitchen and I heard a escape alert : Attention, a dangerous

muderer has escaped from the prison, he has already killed several people.

I saw the murderer's photo. I stood, almost frozen, not knowing what to do because I

had understood that I was with a serial killer. All that time, I heard the door opened and

three men said : police, nobody moves !

Merci d'avance

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Lucas3085
One night, I was walking with my dog named Igor when, suddenly, I heard something.

It was a high-piched scream (cri. cry = pleur) coming from somewhere in the alley. I was very terrified/scared (= terrifié en pire) because I couldn't see anything around me. So I hurried up to get home with Igo.

But when I arrived in front of the door. I heard a footsteps behind me. I completely freaked out. I was trying to open the door when I felt somebody touching my shoulder.

I turned myself and I saw a man. He explained to me that he had lost his key, and that he wanted me, he could wait his wife at my home. We went home and he asked me a cup of tea. I had swiched on the TV in the kitchen and I heard an escape alert : "Warning, a dangerous muderer has escaped from the prison, he has already killed several people."

I saw the murderer's picture. I stood, almost frozen, not knowing what to do because I had understood that I was with a serial killer. Then, I heard the door opening and three men said : police, nobody moves !
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