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bonjour a tous ,
j’ai un devoir a rendre en anglais pouvez vous corriger mes erreurs il faut que je le rende au plus vite,

Every day, I wake up at 06:45and I make my bed, then I have a breakfast, In America we eat egg at the breakfast in France we eating bread butter with a coffee. In America the students begin at 08:30am it is later that France.
And then I have a shower and I’m dressing up afterwards I brush my teeth and I leave.
As soon as the morning I am good moon
My mother drops me off at saint Remy high school because I don’t have time to take the bus.
In America you have yellow school bus to transport students in high school in France it’s don’t exist.
Then I met my friends in front of the lockers and we go to class before the bells ring.
In America and in France we have lockers.
We have different subject; French, mathematics; history and geography...
My different teachers are very friendly; cool especially Mr. Harker my teacher of English
In my class there are more girls than boys.
In France and in America we have almost a same subject. In America as soon as the bell resound the students ability go at the lockers.
In st Remy high school I don’t have the right come at the lockers after the bell rang.
I have five hour to classes in the morning then come on to eating. I eat in my house because my mother come pick up.
In America the students eating their lunch box or can eating in the cafeteria (canteen)
I have 20 minute to eating because I must set of again.
In America high school the students have 30 minutes or more .
I come back to school and I meet my friends in front of the classroom. In the afternoon I have three hours to classes.
In America the students have groups of friends in France the majority of people talking with everybody.
I have again one hour of class before the playground, or I can laugh with my friends about everything and laughting.
Afterwards it me rest one hour before the end of school at 16:15
In America the majority of students finish at 15:35.
Then I return home, I take the bus with my friend because in France the driver’s license self obtain at 18 years, in America the driver’s license self obtain at 16 years. It’s not just. In America after school the students can stay for study, do sports, or go in the clubs of computer science…
In France it not exists.
In evening, I do my homework, I eat and I have a shower. Afterwards I go to my bed and I sleep.
My life it not very interesting but I tell all the same.


merci beaucoup a vous,

Sagot :

RiseOfKathir







Bonsoir,


Every day, I wake up at 06:45and I make my bed, then I have a breakfast, In America, we eat egg at the breakfast in France we eating bread butter with a coffee. In America the students begin at 08:30 am it is later than France.
And then I have a shower and I’m dressing up afterward I brush my teeth and I leave.
As soon as the morning I am good moon
My mother drops me off at Saint Remy high school because I don’t have time to take the bus.
In America, you have a yellow school bus to transport students in high school in France it doesn't exist.
Then I met my friends in front of the lockers and we go to class before the bells ring.
In America and in France we have lockers.
We have a different subject; French, mathematics; history, and geography...
My different teachers are very friendly; cool especially Mr. Harker my teacher of English
In my class, there are more girls than boys.
In France and in America we have almost a same subject. In America as soon as the bell resound the student's ability go at the lockers.
Inst Remy high school I don’t have the right come at the lockers after the bell rang.
I have five hours to classes in the morning then come on to eating. I eat in my house because my mother comes pick up.
In America, the students eating their lunch box or can be eating in the cafeteria (canteen)
I have 20 minutes to eat because I must set off again.
In America, high school the students have 30 minutes or more.
I come back to school and I meet my friends in front of the classroom. In the afternoon I have three hours to classes.
In America, the students have groups of friends in France the majority of people talking with everybody.
I have again one hour of class before the playground, or I can laugh with my friends about everything and laughing.
Afterwards, if I rest one hour before the end of school at 16:15
In America, the majority of students finish at 15:35.
Then I return home, I take the bus with my friend because in France the driver’s license self-obtain at 18 years, in America the driver’s license self-obtain at 16 years. It’s not just. In America after school, the students can stay for study, do sports, or go to the clubs of computer science…
In France, it not exists.
In evening, I do my homework, I eat and I have a shower. Afterwards, I go to my bed and I sleep.
My life is not very interesting but I tell all the same.

J'espère t'avoir aidé et t'en a fais 33 fautes comprenant syntaxe et ponctuation

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