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Bonjour, Voici ma consigne trouver 10 fautes dans ce texte et réécrivez les correctement :) Qui pour m’aider... {The beatles is probably one of the most famous rock band of all times. Two friends, John Lennon and Paul McCartney, started the group in 1960. In the early days, they used to travell around Liverpool and Hamburg, where they did played night after night in clubs to earn a leaving. Then in 1963 they had there first number-one hit: « Please Please Me ». The Beatles becomed immediately successfull, with millions of fans everywhere. What is interesting is that they could play the guitar and compose songs, but none of them could read music! Thought they were together for only ten years, they are steal influential today. But in the begining, not everyone believed in their success. Lennon’s aunt said: « It’s Ok to play the guitar, but you’ll neither get rich ! » }

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Nathea
bonsoir !

je pense avoir trouver les 10 fautes !

The Beatles are probably one of the most famous rock band of all times.Two friends, John Lennon and Paul McCartney, founded (suis pas sûr que ce soit une faute..started est ok aussi) in 1960. In the early days, they used to travel around Liverpool and Hamburg where they played night after night in clubs to earn a living. Then in 1963 they had their first number-one hit : "Please, Please Me". The Beatles became immediately successful, with millions of fans everywhere. What is interesting is that they could play the guitar and "compose songs" (compose music ou write songs..je ne sais pas si ça fait partie des erreurs.), but none of them could read music ! Though they were together for only ten years, they are still influential today. Lennon's aunt said :" It's ok to play the guitar, but you'll never get rich !"

ça fait 11 fautes....donc je ne pense pas que "started" soit une faute. Perso, je le laisserai et ne le remplacerai pas par founded.....


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