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Hi William ! I received the letter in a few days, it goes much faster with the train than with the horses! I do not like the telegraph, I prefer to send real letters like in the good old days. I pay tribute to New York for what I see (Je te felicite pour ta retraite, tu fais tjrs fortune à New York à ce que je vois). By the way, a few years ago, they opened a park in the city ... Central park I think ! It's true that New York right is awfully populated today! And yes, I'm always faithful. I am still in Nevada. Always at the head of my city, it is I who reigns the order here. Stalking the bandits, it always excited me! I know it's time to retire, but I feel in perfect shape ! In addition, there are more and more bandits attacking the trains. I still have to watch. You know I already killed a man, it must be a few years. I have a friend who is a driver, he complains of being attacked regularly. Cargo returns empty ! That's why I'm going to keep my job until someone takes my place. You do not have to worry about me. The city has grown well for 1 year ! There are some farmers who have arrived on a new house built, about 1000 inhabitants ! We can say thank you to the Goldrush which attracted many people. I do not know if you know the people who have made a fortune thanks to Goldrush for that matter, because I do not know anybody. People who lost their time, it is true that I too was attracted by this phenomenon. But I found an activity and a city more pleasant ! I learned that your son was going on a trip to the West, tell him to spend a few days at home !
When was your son's age, everything was so different! Today there are no more slaves, when I heard this news, it did not shock me so much. I know a young person, his father was a slave. He told me all the atrocities he is a sudden, it is true that it can be revolting. However, even if the abolition of slavery is announced, I share your opinion, African-Americans are still persecuted! On the misunderstanding, on a step the same rights, it is perhaps normal ? Before there are many Indians today there is much less. There are often revolts and massacres between whites and Indians. As long as it does not attack my city, I have nothing to reproach them for.
Time is passing, and we are getting older. I will pay you a visit when I am retired. It takes me a few days to come by train! Behave well, see you next time my friend!


Merci d'avance.
Contexte: 1876 en Amérique

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 Bonsoir,

Hi William! I received the letter in a few days, it goes much faster with the train than with the horses! I do not like the telegraph, I prefer to send real letters like in the good old days. I pay tribute to New York for what I see.
By the way, a few years ago, they opened a park in the city...Central park I think! It's true that New York right is awfully populated today! And yes, I'm always faithful. I am still in Nevada. Always at the head of my city, it is I who reigns the order here.
Stalking the bandits, it always excited me! I know it's time to retire, but I feel in perfect shape! In addition, there are more and more bandits attacking the trains. I still have to watch. You know I already killed a man, it must be a few years.
I have a friend who is a driver, he complains of being attacked regularly. Cage returns empty! That's why I'm going to keep my job until someone takes my place. You do not have to worry about me. The city has grown well for 1 year!There are some farmers who have arrived at a new house built, about 1000 inhabitants!
We can say thank you to the Goldrush which attracted many people. I do not know if you know the people who have made a fortune thanks to Goldrush for that matter, because I do not know anybody. People who lost their time, it is true that I too was attracted by this phenomenon. But I found an activity and a city more pleasant ! I learned that your son was going on a trip to the West, tell him to spend a few days at home!


On the misunderstanding, on a step the same rights, it is perhaps normal? Before there are many Indians today there is much less. There are often revolted and massacres between whites and Indians. As long as it does not attack my city, I have nothing to reproach them for.



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