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The tale tells the story of three brothers who arrived at the edge of a river too deep and dangerous to cross. Fortunately, since they were endowed with the power of magic, they made a bridge appear. In the middle of the bridge, they met a veiled figure, Death itself. Death was angry that these men could cross without perishing, while others brave were all drowned in the waters of the river. She then imagined a Machiavellian plan to restore what seemed right to her and pretended to be happy that they had survived, and proved it to them by offering them a gift to each.
The oldest of the brothers, combative, asked for a wand so powerful, that it could never lose, wand that the man deserved for having conquered the Death. Then Death took a branch of an elder tree and cut out the Elder's Wand. The arrogant second brother, who wanted to humiliate Death even more, asked him for the power to bring the dead back to life. Death took a stone near the river, gave it to him, and affirmed that he was now in possession of the Resurrection Stone. The youngest, humble and cunning, had no faith in Death, asked him an object that would allow him to move without being seen by Death. Death therefore reluctantly gave him his Cloak of Invisibility. Afterwards, she moved away, and the brothers continued on their way.

With time, they parted to live each their life. The oldest of the brothers provoked many duels, which he never lost. But, to his misfortune, he asserted everywhere that his power came from his unbeatable wand given by death itself. With this advertisement, one night, a jealous sorcerer stole his old wand and cut his throat in his sleep. This is how Death fell on the first brother.

The second brother lived alone in his house. He turned the stone three times in his hands, and his beauty, destined for him, but dead before the marriage, appeared. Unfortunately, this one still belonged to the kingdom of the dead and she was only a soul in pain


Sagot :

Je ne sais pas exactement les critères avec lesquels ton enseignant/e va évaluer ton texte mais il me semble plutôt bien. Pour les quelques erreurs d’orthographe et le fait que ton texte me semble un peu incomplet( je ne veux pas être méchante en disant ça j’espère seulement t’aider et je ne sais pas si tu devait justement écrire une histoire sans situation finale pour ton ecole), je te donnerais une note qui se situe entre 84 et 92%. J’espère t’avoir aidé!