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Bonjour à tous merci de m'aider pour ce texte que j'ai écris en anglais. Nous devions écrire une histoire en rapport avec la guerre ANZAC. J'aimerai savoir si il y a des fautes aux Verbes? Merci à l'avance.

My name is Jack, I will tell you my story... 
My father was dead when I was 10 years old. So, I was the new father of the family. Me, my mother, my little sister Lisa and Bryan my little brother were living in a beautiful house near the beach in Australia. 
But one day my mother became ill, and the doctor couldn't do anything. So I had to take care of my family. I did all the chores every day, the education of my fathers....

When I was 19years old, I went to the village and I saw in a newspaper that the war was announced. I was terrified to leave Lisa and Bryan. Who was going to take care of them? Did I could see my mother another time? Did I could come back?

All the boys over 18 years old were recruited to go to Galliopoli to defend the Great-Britain. I went to the harbour to take the steamer for 7weeks. It was very long, we were all crowd on the deck where his felt death. During the journey we couldn't see the differences between the blue of the sea and the blue of the sky. Some people died sitting in the boat while others threw themselves on the water. I think about it but I didn't have the courage.

When we were arrived at Gallipoli, the only thing I wanted was to go back to my family.

The fear, the anxiety punctuated our days, all mixed together we knew that we were confronted with this same fear. The minutes were hours.


After many adventures I came back to Australia and I was extremely happy that all this nightmare finally stopped before I knew my mom was dead. She thinks I couldn't come and she gives all his belongings to a Man who only took advantage of his money, our money. At that moment I understand the fighting was nothing compared to the one we were going to confront. Because I was lonely with Lisa and Bryan.




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Vu que le sujet parle de l'Australie, je suis bien obligé de t'aider ;)My name is Jack, I will tell you my story... My father died when I was 10 years old. So, I became the new father of the family. Me, my mother, my little sister Lisa and Bryan my little brother were living in a beautiful house near a beach in Australia. 
But one day my mother became ill, and the doctor couldn't do anything. So I had to take care of my family once more. I did all the house chores every day, the education of my brothers and much more.

When I was 19 years old, I went to a village and I saw in a newspaper that the next war was announced. I was terrified to leave Lisa and Bryan. Who was going to take care of them? Would I be able to see my mother again? Would I ever come back? All the boys over 18 years old were recruited to go to Gallipoli to defend Great-Britain. I went to the harbour to take the steamer for 7 weeks. It was very long,  crowds filled the deck where the feeling of near-death passed was in our hearts. During the journey, we couldn't see the differences between the blue of the sea and the blue of the sky. Some people died sitting in the boat while others threw themselves into the water. I thought about it but I didn't have the courage. When we arrived at Gallipoli, the only thing I wanted to do was to go back to my family. The fear, the anxiety punctuated our days. All mixed together we knew that we were confronted with this same fear. The minutes felt like hours.
After many adventures I came back to Australia and I was extremely happy that this nightmare had come to end before my mother passed away. She thought I wouldn't come back so she had given all our money and belongings to a man. This cruel man had taken advantage of my mother's weakness to abuse the priveledges she had given him. He took all our money.  At that moment I understood that fighting in the war was going to be nothing compared to the one we were going to have to face. Because I was lonely with Lisa and Bryan.
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