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Bonjour! J'aimerai savoir si quelqu'un pouvait corriger ma Lettre de Motivation ci-dessous. Merci beaucoup d'avance!

Dear Sir, Madam,

In order to deepen my language skills, I chose the English language license. Passionate about foreign languages, literature and concerned to develop sufficient capacities to direct me towards the teaching or the journalism, I chose to turn to your establishment which propose the specialty "Français Langue Etrangère".
History being one of my favorite subject, I feel a great interest to discover England's and the United States History and culture. Writing and reading English is an integral part of my daily life through my conversations on the internet and social medias. I have several penpals with whom I discuss regularly. I've been on a linguistic trip with my school during which I was able to familiarize myself with the English mores and meet my penpal.
Furthermore, I sometimes translate texts or videos to help my friends and the people around me. I am able to have an oral and written discussion, but I'm also able to translate Short Stories for leisure.
I like to argue and finelly analyze texts, so I want to do the same in a language such as English. Captivated by literature, I read many books in English like Poetry, Philosophy and Biography.. Member of a Philosophy Club for two years, I developed a taste for writing and arguing.

With plans to pursue my studies focused on teaching or journalism, integrating your etablishment would help me perfecting my English knowledge.
Incorporate your establishment, renowned for the quality of its teachings, would allow me to train successfully. I am determined and ready to implement all my abilities.

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Dear Sir, Madam,
In order to deepen my language skills, I chose the English language license. Passionate about foreign languages, literature and concerned to develop sufficient capacities to direct me towards the teaching or the journalism, I chose to turn to your establishment which propose the specialty "Français Langue Etrangère".
History being one of my favorite subjects, I feel a great interest to discover England's and the United States History and culture. Writing and reading English is an integral part of my daily life through my conversations on the internet and social media.I have several pen pals with whom I discuss regularly. I've been on a linguistic trip with my school during which I was able to familiarize myself with the English mores and meet my penpal.
Furthermore, I sometimes translate texts or videos to help my friends and the people around me. I am able to have an oral and written discussion, but I'm also able to translate Short Stories for leisure.I like to argue and finally analyze texts, so I want to do the same in a language such as English. Captivated by literature, I read many books in English like Poetry, Philosophy and Biography.. Member of a Philosophy Club for two years, I developed a taste for writing and arguing.
With plans to pursue my studies focused on teaching or journalism, integrating your establishment would help me perfecting my English knowledge.
Incorporate your establishment, renowned for the quality of its teachings, would allow me to train successfully. I am determined and ready to implement all my abilities.

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