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Bonjour j'ai un genre d'exposer à faire en anglais sur ma passion je dois tenir à l'oral à peu près 5min alors j'ai fait mon texte mais j'aimerais quelques avis et puis être sûres qu'il n'y ai pas de faute dedans merci d'avance de m'aider.

I decide to speaker about my old hobby, thé rythmic gymnastic. i practiced this sport during seven years. I start thanks to friend and I loved it right away. First, I do 2hours per week and then, I began competition consequently, I do between 4and 6 hours mer week
I always practice this sport with a team because I think it's more fun and I didn't want doing that alone. I was, with my team, during two years champion of Alsace and we went to France championship six years ago, we were 5th of 30. The competitions were fun times when the gymnasts had to wear beautiful leotard.
I was keen on hight level rythmic gymnastic that's why, I watched vert often world rythmic gymnastic championship or olympic games videos.
I loved this sport it's a sport that allows me to gain confidence in myself which is very artistic ans brings flexibility and agility. During the seven years that I practiced this sport I tried all the instruments, the hoop, the ribbon, thé clubs ans the rope except thé balloon. Thé one I prefer is the hoop because it seems simple tout use but it's not the case and I think it's the most impressive.
Many of my friend had the same passion and my parents were proud of me and totaly accept I do this sport. rythmic gymnastic it's a sport which is very demanding for the body so it's not uncommon to had back troubles or many other problems because of this sport. A second disavantages it's the time it takes.
I should stop this sport since three years owing tout back pain that I had all the time due to a displaced vertebra.

Je voulais aussi être sûre que les traductions sont exactes: massues=clubs, cerceau =hoop, ruban= ribbon, ballon=balloon, corde=rope

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I decided to speak about my old hobbies. , the gymnatic rythmic. I practiced this sport during seven years. I started thanks to friend and I loved it right away. First, I practiced 2hours per week and then, I began competition consequently, I did between 4and 6 hours by week.
I always practice this sport with a team because I think it's more fun and I didn't want doing that alone. I was, with my team, during two years champion  Alsace and we been to France championship six years ago, we were 5th on 30. The competitions were fun times when the gymnasts had to wear beautiful leotard. 
I was keen on hight level rythmic gymnastic that's why, I watched  often world rythmic gymnastic championship or olympic games videos.
I loved this sport it's a sport that allows me to gain confidence in myself which is very artistic ans brings flexibility and agility  During this seven years that I practiced this sport I tried all the instruments, the hoop, the ribbon, the clubs ans the rope except the balloon. The one I prefer is the hoop because it seems simple use but it's not the case and I think it's the most impressive.
Many of my friend had the same passion and my parents were proud of me and  they totaly accepted I do this sport. rythmic gymnastic it's a sport which is very demanding for the body so it's not uncommon to had back troubles or many other problems because of this sport. A second disavantages it's the time it takes.
I should stop this sport since three years owing tout back pain that I had all the time due to a displaced vertebra.
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