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Bonsoir , pouvez vous s'il vous plait corriger mon texte en Anglais ? ( je sais qu'il est très long ,) vous pourriez raccourcir des phrases tout en traduisant , mais il faut que mon texte soit cohérent. Je dois utilser le préterit , faire 150 mots.
Merci beaucoup de votre courage et de votre volonté

 The captain looked familiar to me, I thought I had already seen him when he laughed at us and said, “Ah ah, you scoundrels, you believed me! I'm Edward Taught, aka Blackbeard.” I and my classmates were surprised, how? So he lied to us! That's why this man already seemed to me to have met him, he was the terrible, rich, obnoxious Blackbeard who ruled the coasts of Caroline and Virginia with terror.

Blackbeard called his comrades, who outnumbered us. He asked them to fight us with the sword, and if we defeated them, he could offer us a rare treasure. But the fight was unfair and horrible, and really stronger, gifted than us. It was a disaster! My companions were pushed into the water filled with dangerous creatures.


All my friends died because of that sadistic Blackbeard who said “Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, I think you lost the duel, my poor thief, now we're going to fight between captains” Then, he came towards me, and immediately poked my eye out. I thought I would die in a moment, so I fainted, and didn't move. I felt so bad, I was hot, I was dizzy..... Blackbeard thought I was dead, he laughs “The sharks will be happy to eat him!”

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The captain looked familiar to me, I thought I had already seen him when he laughed at us and said, “Ah ah, you scoundrels, you believed me! I'm Edward Teach, aka Blackbeard.” I and my classmates were surprised, how? So he lied to us! That's why this man seemed familiar to me, he was the terrible, rich, obnoxious Blackbeard who ruled the coasts of Carolina and Virginia with terror.

Blackbeard called his comrades, who outnumbered us. He asked them to fight us with the sword, and if we defeated them, he would offer us a rare treasure. But the fight was unfair and horrible, as they were really stronger and more gifted than us. It was a disaster! My companions were pushed into the water filled with dangerous creatures.

All my friends died because of that sadistic Blackbeard who said “Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, Ha, I think you lost the duel, my poor thief, now we're going to fight between captains.” Then, he came towards me, and immediately poked my eye out. I thought I would die in a moment, so I fainted, and didn't move. I felt so bad, I was hot, I was dizzy..... Blackbeard thought I was dead, he laughs “The sharks will be happy to eat him!”

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