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Bonsoir ,

Pouvez vous s'il vous plait me dire si mon poème en Anglais qui parle de sécher l'école avec un style humoristique , et avec des excuses comme les maladies est bien ou pas ?

Vous pouvez modifier mon poème , rajouter des choses , le corriger ect….

Je dois faire des rimes


Voici le poème :


On Monday, I don't go to school
I'm sleeping , and it's cool.
I don't intend to get up.
I am small , so I still have to grow up.

On Tuesday, I stay in my bed
My face is all red
I coloured it for the pimples with the red pen
I have " chicken pox " so I can eat candy in the kitchen


On Wednesday, I coloure black under my eyes
I then have like dark circles
My parents ask me why I am so tired
I answer I overstudied


On Thursday, it rains outside
I don't want to get wet , I prefer to stay inside
I don't want to either. to chase after the neighbors' dog
Nor after a bullfrog

On Friday, all week long, I haven't reviewed a lesson.
I'm afraid I'm gonna get an hour's detention
So this Monday, I still won't be going to school
I'll pretend I ate expired toadstool

Merci d'avance de votre aide !


Sagot :

On Monday, I don't go to school  

I'm sleeping , and it's cool.

I don't intend to get up.

I am small , so I still have to grow up.  

On Tuesday, I stay in my bed  

My face is all red

I drew pimples on my face with a red pen  (drew = j'ai dessiné)

I have " chicken pox " so I can eat candies in the kitchen

On Wednesday, I made dark circles under my eyes  (je me suis fait des    cernes noirs)

It look so real I was surprised    

My parents ask me why I was so exhausted  ( exhausted et averstudied font id à la fin et non tired)

I answered  them, I overstudied  

On Thursday, it's raining outside

I don't want to get wet , I prefer to stay inside

I don't want neither chase after the neighbors' dog

Nor after a bullfrog  

On Friday, all week long, I haven't reviewed any lesson.

I'm afraid, I'm gonna get an hour's detention

So this Monday, I still won't go to school

I'll pretend to have eaten a  toadstool