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Bonsoir ,

Pouvez vous s'il vous plait me dire si mon poème en Anglais qui parle de sécher l'école avec un style humoristique , et avec des excuses comme les maladies ect... est bien ou pas ?

Vous pouvez le corriger si il y a des fautes , modifier ect..

Merci d’avance



Title : No school all week long


On Monday, I don't go to school
I'm sleeping , and it's cool.
I don't intend to get up.
I am small , so I still have to grow up.

On Tuesday, I stay in my bed
My face is all red
I drew pimples on my face with a red pen
I have " chicken pox " so I can eat candies in the kitchen

On Wednesday, I coloure black under my eyes
I then have like dark circles
My parents ask me why I was so exhausted
I answered them, I overstudied

On Thursday, it's raining outside
I don't want to get wet , I prefer to stay inside
I don't want neither chase after the neighbors' dog
Nor after a bullfrog

On Friday, all week long, I haven't reviewed any lesson.
I'm afraid, I'm gonna get an hour's detention
So this Monday, I still won't go to school
I'll pretend to have eaten a toadstool

Sagot :

Nathea

Bonjour



On Monday, I don't go to school

I sleep all day long and it's cool

I don't want to get up

I am too young and I still have to grow up.



On Tuesday, I want to stay home again

I draw pimples with a red pen

I have "chicken-pox"

I really can't be on the starting blocks.

ou pour les 2 premières lignes ==>

On Tuesday, I feel like staying in bed

So I draw pimples and my face becomes all red

..........



On Wednesday, It's raining outside

I don't want to get  wet, I'd rather stay inside

ou

On Wednesday it's raining dogs and cats  (= il tombe des cordes; expression)

But I have no rain hats (I don't have any rain hats)

I want neither chase after the neighbor's dog

Nor after a bull-frog

I don't want to be chased by the neighbor's dog

I seems too odd



On Thursday, I draw dark cirles under my eyes

I know I'm not wise  (I know this is all lies)

My parents ask me why I look so exhausted today

I tell them I overstudy  yesterday.


On Wednesday, I haven't reviewed still any lesson

I'm afraid, I'm gonna get an hour of detention

So this Monday, no way to go back to school

I'll pretend I have eaten a toadstool.

(ou pour la dernière phrase)

I'll pretend that's new home rule

I'll say it's my new golden rule

And it's not an April fool (et ce n'est pas un poisson d'avril)



voilà quelques idées. J'ai essayé de maintenit le présent comme demandé et de repecter les rimes (leurs sonorités ...)



Bonne rentrée



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