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Bonjour, je vous en suplie aidez-moi :je voudrais savoir si ce texte ci-dessous est bien rédigé. Ma proffessseur d'anglais nous a demandé de préparez un texte sur nos vacances de noël en utilisant soit le present perfect sois le prétérit. Mais mes connaisances ne sont pas très solides en Anglais du coup j'ai pas confiance en mon texte.

For this holiday, I went to America with my family to celebrate Christmas and the new year. The first week, I shopped with my mom to buy Christmas presents. To prepare the Christmas dinner, we went to my mother's girlfriend and cooked together. I received many gifts (money, clothes, accessories), the next day I played sports. The second week, we returned to France and we celebrate the new year at an aunt's house in Paris.

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For this holiday, I went to America with my family to celebrate Christmas and the new year. The first week, I shopped with my mom to buy Christmas presents. To prepare the Christmas dinner, we went to my mother's girlfriend and cooked together. I received many gifts (money, clothes, accessories), the next day I played sports. The second week, we returned to France and we celebrate the new year at an aunt's house in Paris.


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During these holiday, I went to America with my family to celebrate Christmas and the new year. The first week, I went shopping with my mom to buy Christmas presents. To prepare the Christmas dinner, we went to my mother's friend and cooked together. I received many gifts (money, clothes, accessories), the next day I played sports. The second week, we returned to France and we celebrated the new year at an aunt's house in Paris.


I shopped = j'ai magasiné

mother's girlfriend = la petite amie de ma mère

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