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Dear diary,

Today was a difficult day. I had to ate the same food for the breakfast, dinner and supper. I'm fed up, I can't support this. And the worst, was that it was disgusting. For the breakfast and dinner I had to ate bread, cheese and broth but it depends what day is was, for example, if we were sunday so we had to ate bread and cheese, if we were Monday so we had to ate broth etc. and for supper I ate meat or porridge, it's also depends on the day.
First, I had to woke up at 6 am then, I had to make beds, pray, clean shoes and wash from 6 am to 7 am. In the morning at 7 am I had to do gymnastics exercises. Then at 7 : 45 I had to pray, ate breakfast and play. From 9 am to 10 am I had to do historical reading. After that, from 10 am to 11 am, I had to to general and mental arithmetic, tables and as I had to learnt the time of day so I had to use clock dial. Then, from 11 am to 12 am I had to do grammar, parsing and dictation. Later on, At 12 am I had to ate dinner and then it was the recreation. At 2 pm I had to wrote in the copy book and I did arithmetic. From 3 pm to 5 pm I had to read with explanations after that, I had to do geography wiht maps. At 6 pm I ate supper. Finally, I did the prayers and I retire to bed.
The girls had more recreation whereas the boys has just one recreation. The boys had more educations than girls. Boys did grammar or spelling whereas girls had domestic employment. Girls has religious instruction whereas boys didn't had. Girls had to knitted whereas boys don't do this.
In workhouses I had to ate the same tasteless food day after day.
I was shocked when I had to split up. I couldn't speak to my families otherwise I would be punished so I was disappointed with that. I had to wore uniforms and also I couldn't fight in school. I couldn't learnt read and wrote but there was education. And I was worried because I had to lived and worked i different places.
Sometimes, I feel sleepy but I couldn't sleep otherwise I will be punished and I didn't know my punishment so I didn't sleep. I was very sad because I couldn't see my parents, brother and sister.
I was very angry when they didn't given me more food. I was nervous, confused and embarrassed when I came for the first time. And I was shocked when they split up.
Seriously, I'm so bored, I missed my family and I feel so lonely.

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Louane37

Dear diary,

Today was a difficult day. I had to ate the same food for the breakfast, dinner and supper. I'm fed up, I can't support this. And the worst, was that it was disgusting. For the breakfast and dinner, I had to ate bread, cheese and broth, but it depends what day is, for example, if we were Sunday, so we had to ate bread and cheese, if we were Monday, so we had to ate broth etc. and for supper I ate meat or porridge, it's also depends on the day.

First, I had to woke up at 6 am then, I had to make beds, pray, clean shoes and wash from 6 am to 7 am. In the morning at 7 am, I had to do gymnastics exercises. Then at 7 : 45 I had to pray, ate breakfast and play. From 9 am to 10 am, I had to do historical reading. After that, from 10 am to 11 am, I had to to general and mental arithmetic, tables and as I had to learn the time of day so I had to use clock dial. Then, from 11 am to 12 am, I had to do grammar, parsing and dictation. Later on, At 12 am, I had to ate dinner and then it was the recreation. At 2 pm I had to write in the copy book and I did the arithmetic. From 3 pm to 5 pm I had to read with explanations after that, I had to do geography with maps. At 6 p.m. I ate supper. Finally, I did the prayers and I retire to bed.

The girls had more recreation, whereas the boys have just one recreation. The boys had more educations than girls. The boys did grammar, or spelling, whereas the girls had domestic employment. Girls has religious instruction, whereas boys didn't have. The girls had to be knitted whereas boys don't do this.

In workhouses I had to ate the same taste food day after day.

I was shocked when I had to split up. I couldn't speak to my families otherwise I would be punished so I was disappointed with that. I had to wore uniforms and also I couldn't fight in school. I couldn't learn read and wrote, but there was education. And I was worried because I had to live and worked I different places.

Sometimes, I feel sleepy but I couldn't sleep otherwise I will be punished and I didn't know my punishment so I didn't sleep. I was very sad because I couldn't see my parents, brother and sister.

I was very angry when they didn't give me more food. I was nervous, confused and embarrassed when I came for the first time. And I was shocked when they split up.

Seriously, I'm so bored, I missed my family

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