Bonsoir, je passe mon oral de bac d'anglais lundi. Je souhaiterai que l'on me corrige ma notion espaces et échanges que j'ai réalisé sur l'Inde:
Spaces and exchanges

The notion I’m going to deal with is the spaces and exchanges. To begin, I would like to give a precision of “spaces and exchanges”: with the globalization and the new technologies, exchanges and interactions are increasingly present in the world. Certain country same India are torn between modernity and traditions who are really late especially on the women condition.
We can wonder “in what India is a paradox?”
At first, we can see what India is a country modern. In the second part, we can see what India is a “dark country”.

I. India, a country modern

India is a third economic word. With the launching of informatically business, nearly have access to the internet.
India is a country very developed in the digital’s economic, in information’s and communication’s technologies. This is a powerful global.
These pays have a growth dynamic.
With the new programs that have the objective to transform India’s population about its modern’s population with frame same Smart Cities, Digital India, and Skill India and electronic service.
A lot of people are qualificator in technologies which permitted the growth of GDB (PIB).
The numeric layout is in expansion.
In the cities, a lot of people are riches.
Gandhi was a person very important for independence in India.
Many religions existed in India, that indicate a great tolerance between person.
India is modern with the mode. Lots of clothes are a factory in India’s factories.
Bollywood is as well an example of modernity. Since it’s a musical cinema industry based in Mumbai. Films are realized in Hindi. For the Indians, it’s more industry or art, it’s a real culture or a mode of life.

II. India, a “dark country”

India is the second most populous country in the world with 1,2 billion people. This country is seen as a spiritual and free pay but in real, it’s not exactly. In the document The caste system in India, I discover why life is very difficult for a lot of Indian. It exists 5 castes and only one may be educated but just boys, there are the Brahmins. They are the most powerful caste and all is great but when are an Untouchable, you are just little above the slaves, it’s the poorest caste.
Any groups can’t eat together, get married and be friends and any people are allowed to mix with people from other caste.
The women carry a sari, it’s traditional clothes. It’s a large tunic that serves to hide their shapes.
In this country, women are considered a burden. A few gendercides took place. A gendercide is when a national policy decides for certain reasons to kill the female gender.
A lot of girls are killed by their own father because a woman did not win money. With the text Another girl”, we can see in what for a girl you should pay the dowry and over things that’s why some husband force their wife to kill the owner baby girl.

Conclusion :
For conclude, we can say that India is a paradox between the tradition and the modernity. It’s a country who appears really modern in the outdoor but much less inside. In the cities, it’s riches but around, in the shanty towns, poverty is very impressive.