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Bonjour j’ai un oral à passer en anglais sur le film lion je l’ai rédigé mes j’ai un problème ça doit durer 5 minutes et c’est trop long pouvais vous m’aider à raccourcir mon texte à partir de The film then shows us his life 20 years later. mes en racontant toute l’histoire
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Lion, is an American-British-Australian film he tells the incredible true story of an Indian child named Saroo in the city of Khandwa. He comes from a very very poor but loving family. At the age of 5, he is already working hard trying to help his big brother, to support the family and his mother. One night while helping his brother at work, he inadvertently enters a train and remains stuck in it by not knowing how to open the door. The train starts for a crazy journey of more than 1600km. He finds himself at the other end of India. At age 5, he arrives in the city of Calcutta ... A few months later he ends up in an orphanage that tries to find his family with the few clues that holds this child of 5 years. But nothing ... he is finally adopted by a couple in Australia. So he goes on another contains. The film then shows us his life 20 years later. This boy has been educated in this wealthy family but something is wrong in him ... images that come back, a sadness and a need to find his roots that loved him but he lost without wanting. He still thinks of his family ... Armed with a few rare memories and a great determination, he begins to browse satellite photos on Google Earth, hoping to recognize his village and find his family.




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bonsoir, j'ai lu ton texte et cela m'a pris à peine 2 minutes donc c'est plutot trop court. D'autre part, as-tu eu une consigne pour écrire ton texte au présent? A ta place, j'utiliserais le passé (he came from a ver very poor but  loving family, etc...)

si tu décides de rallonger ton texte, tu pourrais donner ton avis sur le film : par exemple: I like this movie because it shows us that it's important to know where we come from. It shows that an adopted child need to know where his roots are.Nobody can escape from where he comes from and everyone has to know about his past

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