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Bonjour, je dois a l'oral être un fan de ces deux auteur et je voulais savoir si je n'étais pas hors sujet surtout au niveau de ma conclusion.

Hello my name is Clement and I'm here today to talk about my favorite famous writter : George Orwell and Ray Bradbury.
If I have the choice to choose the best writter in the world I will choose them. First of all, let me introduce themselves:
George Orwell is a famous writter of the 20s century. He is from UK and he became famous for his amazing prédiction like the Ipad, the automatic sliding doors even the atomic bomb ! That's why today we can called him "The man who invented tommorrow".
One of his best-seller is 1984.

Turn to Ray Bradbury, he is from United States and he also is a famous writter of 20s century. Ray predicted flatsreen télévision. He wrote a famous brooks called Farenheit 451.

To conclude, Both are the amazing dystopian science-fiction novelist that's why I love them so much. They success to represent a dystopia really near to the reality. For me, nowadays It also allows to warn peolple against any kind of dictature and it's really important when
When we see what is happening in the country like Brazil or Russian that's why I really like them.​

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Hello my name is Clement and I'm here today to talk about my favourite famous writer : George Orwell and Ray Bradbury.
If I have the choice to choose the best writer in the world I will choose them. First of all, let me introduce themselves:
George Orwell is a famous writer of the 20s century. He is from UK and he became famous for his amazing prediction like the IPad, the automatic sliding doors even the atomic bomb! That's why today we can called him "The man who invented tomorrow".
One of his best-seller is 1984.  Turn to Ray Bradbury, he is from United States and he also is a famous writer of 20s century. Ray predicted flatsreen television. He wrote a famous brooks called Fahrenheit 451.  To conclude, Both are the amazing dystopian science-fiction novelist that's why I love them so much. They success to represent a dystopia really near to the reality. For me, nowadays It also allows to warn people against any kind of dictator and it's really important when
When we see what is happening in the country like Brazil or Russian that's why I really like them.​

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