Bonjour, je dois raconter trois journées de mes vacances en anglais au prétérit
J'ai fini mon devoir mais j'aimerais que quelqu'un me le relise et corrige si besoin les fautes de cohérence, de grammaire ou bien d'orthographe. Merci d'avance

Première journée :
Today morning I woke up at half past eight. Firstly I did my morning routine, I washed my face and brushed my teeth. For breakfast I had milk with cereals. After my breakfast I went over my room and I checked social medias. Nice holidays mean to me freedom, fun and relaxation but of course I cannot always enjoy them because I have a lot of thing to do for school so this day I studied and do my homework until lunch. After lunch my big sister came at home and together we made a chocolate cake, it was fun. Next we watched a movie called "Non-stop", it was about a man who received a text saying someone on the plane will die every twenty minutes unless $150 million is transferred into a specefic bank account. So the man will try to find the killer.
Then, I took a shower and we had dinner at eight. At dinner we dicussed about what happened during the day. After I helped clean the dishes. At least I went to bed around eleven pm.

Deuxième journée :
Today I did my usual morning routine of washing my face, bushing my teeth, eating my breakfast and checking social medias. Ten I watched videos on YouTube during almost an hour. At 11am, I got dressed and I brushed my hair then I went to my sister home. We went to the mall and we purchased some clothes. After that we went to a kebab restaurant and we took sandwiches and coke. In the evening we came back to home, we watched tv with my family and around 8 o'clock we took dinner. After taking dinner I played game on my computer with my sister and I finally slept around eleven pm.

Troisième journée :
I spent this day very enjoyfull, it was Lina's birthday party so I woke up earlier than usually to buy her a gift with my parents. We went to the mall and after one hour I finally bought her a perfume. Her birthday party took plac at her home at 2:30 pm. Her birthday party was very cool, I really enjoyed it. We pplayed at some fun games and the cake was delicious. I came to home at 6pm, we had diner at 8pm and I went to bed at 11pm