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Bonjour, je dois rendre pour demain un petit paragraphe rédigé en Anglais au sujet du "Gap Year". Je dois dire si il me plairait d'en prendre un au cours de mes études et pourquoi.

Voici ce que j'ai rédigé, j'aimerais que l'on me corrige si possible, Merci d'avance ;) !

For sure, I want to take a gap year. First, a gap year can open your mind, break with the boring school. You can do anything anytime, it's very cool i think ! But for me, taking a year out is useless if you don't travel. In my opinion, it's the best thing to learn and enjoy. You can discover many cultures, extraordinary people and pratice originals works. I belive it can be many valuable to increase your skills. But, in the other hand, i believe taking a gap year includes bad things to : you can forget school and even you are focused you will not be as concentrated as one year ago. Moreover, you are too far from your family and your friends. But if i can in the future, i will take a gap year !

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For sure, I want to take a gap year. First, a gap year can open your mind, break with the boring school. You can do anything anytime; it's very cool I think! But for me, taking a year out is useless if you don't travel. In my opinion, it's the best thing to learn and enjoy. You can discover many cultures, extraordinary people and practice originals works. I believe it can be many valuable to increase your skills. But, in the other hand, I believe taking a gap year includes bad things to: you can forget school and even you are focused you will not be as concentrated as one year ago. Moreover, you are too far from your family and your friends. But if I can in the future, I will take a gap year!
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