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Bonsoir,
anglais
consigne:Tu as empreinté un livre à la bibliothèque mais tu n'as pas pu le rendre.Raconte une suite de péripéties extravagantes mais logique!
Veuillez corriger mon texte(fautes grammaticales.erreurs de formulations)
voici ma premiere partie:
Dears mister,
I’m writting to apologie for not giving back the book.I would like to offer my heart felt apologies.
Let me try to explain you my hard day.
All strated on October 30 th.I was invited to a Halloween party,so Iweard my rabbit disguise.
When I went out of the house,the door has closed on the book.
I pulled it and infortunately some pages wer snatched.
I decided to enter back at home and use my scotch tape to glue the pages.
When I finished ,Iwas riding my bike on the way to the library.
I was daydreaming,when I suddenly hitted against the car of two young men.They looklike weird, Iwas worried.
Iapologized but they don’t want to hear me.They yelled very vulgar things and load me in their car.
Fiew minutes later,they parked and cared me.My kidnappers threw me over the bridge.I fell in the water (the water was very cold!!)
I was reover by fisherman in a fishing net.
I just had the time to breath that I started to run because Iwas followed by dogs.I don’t know hox I found my self among the crowd.There was a parade and Ihave been stuck between all these people.I finnaly understand it was Halloween




Sagot :

Dear Sir,
I am writing to apologise for not giving back the book that I borrowed recently. I would like to offer my heartfelt apologies for not having returned it previously.
Let me try to explain you my hard day.
It all strated on October 30th when I was invited to a Halloween party, so I was wearing my rabbit outfit.
When I left home, the door closed on the book.
I pulled it and unfortunately some pages were torn.
I decided to go back inside my house and use my Scotch tape to glue the pages.
When I had finished, I set off on my bike to the library. 
I was daydreaming, when I suddenly collided with the car of two young men. They looked weird and I was worried.
I apologized but they didn’t want to hear me.They yelled very vulgar things and bundled me into their car.
A few minutes later they parked and my kidnappers threw me over a bridge. I fell in the water (the water was very cold!!)
I was recovered by a fisherman in his net.
I just had the time to catch my breath before I had to run because I was being chased by dogs.I don’t know how I found myself among the crowd. There was a parade and I was stuck between all these people. I finally understood that it was Halloween.