Salut! j'ai besoin d'aide pour l'anglais: je doit faire une ''scary story'' comme Mrs Harter avec son neuveu Charles..Il faut mettre un moment de doute,nous ne devons pas savoir la fin de l'histoire.. donc j'ai fais mon devoir mais je ne sait pas si les verbe sont bien conjuguer parceque je ne sais pas quand il faut utiliser le "Past BE+ING" et le "SIMPLE PAST" s'il vous plait est-ce que vous pouvez corriger les erreur que j'ai faite? merci d'avance ^^
(oui je sais il n'est pas très bien..)
The scene takes place in the big old dilapidated house. It is set in 2014, more precisely the twenty-third of October in Lyon. It is the story of Léo Grand, a young child, he was 13 years old and he lives with his mother only because his parents died from a car accident. His mother was a widow and she was old. In Lyon there were many killer clowns ... Léo was a serious student. His grand-mother liked very much him.
Firs of all, Leo went to the park to playing football with his friends, it was cold and windy. His grand mother Marie was going to the neighbor.After completing their football game, he went at home but suddenly,in the way,behind him,he saw a clown and he was very afraid.The clown was following him.He rushed to get at home.When he was getting at home he was seeing-out the window if the clown was still there,there was nobody . Relieved he turned on the t.v, he watch a film . for a moment the screen becomed black ,the light was blinking and that's when someone knocked at the door Léo heard someone shouted :” Leo i'm here... Leo i'm here” ,almost imediately he ran to this room and hide under his bed ,it was a clown with an ax in hand, and he entered in house,he climbed the stairs and entered in Leo's room.Leo hearded this steps...