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Hey !

J'aimerais juste que vous me dites si mon texte ne comporte pas trop de fautes, merci ^^

In 2010 Jodie and two of her friends saw the film ''Into the Wild'' and decided to go to Alaska. The trip lasted 70 hours which they drove in turns. They ate cold spaghetti cans and slept in the car, because hotels was too expensive. There, they worked in a farm, visited parks and saw some yellowstones. They noticed many animals live in Alaska, like bears, moses, buffaloes, prairie dogs...
In this country, in summer there is no night and no day in winter. Besides in Alaska, means of transport are limited because there are no many roads. Althrough that, Jodie and her friends appreciated the parks with glaciers.
For the back trip, they took another way to see many others landscapes.

I think the trip to Alaska would be too long for me, eat cans while 70 hours on the road, sleep in a car and word in a farm wouldn't please to me.

Merci de vos réponses ^^

Sagot :

Dans la 1ère phrase : and THEY decided to go in Alaska.
The trip lasted seventy hours, they drove the car each turn. They ate cold spaghetti and tin cans. They slept in the car because there hotel were too much expensive.
Then, they worked in a farm, visited parks and they saw rivers. (...) Besides, in Alaska, the transport means are limitated (...) After this (...) Eat tin cans for 70 hours ...
Voilà quelques petites corrections, mon niveau d'anglais n'est pas parfait mais ça devrait suffire.
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