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Bonjour tout le monde c'est vraiment urgent j'ai un discours à faire pour demain en anglaisest-ce que quelqu'un pourrait m'aider à corriger les fautes s'il vous plaît merci d'avance alors voici mon devoir:

I can't stand the deforestation un the amazon rainforest !
Did you know that 17% of the amazonian forest bas been destroyed in 5 years between 2000 and 2005?
This figure ils vert explicit, it shows the magnitude of what we are doing to the main countries involved are: brazil, Colombia...
So the south of America.
Now, there is a race for the amazonian territory between all this countries.
The colonisation of the amazonian forest associates with a prolifération of conflicts with local people in the context which property rights are not clearly defined.
Then, why would continue to shave those lands ?
We can't let this forest levin peace as it bas been for centuries ?
The ravages of déforestation are enormous .
Trees are cut or burned much faster than the rate
Of régénération or of plantation.
Sustainable management and they are absurd of the ressources.
Every Years the amazon rainforest discreases.
Every years land is Rased, every Yeats the animals die !
But because of who?
These are the men who cuts everything that interest them and they only recover thar is salable.
The oïl palm plantation or soybeans are also actors of the déforestation in amazonia
Vast areas of rainforest are destroyed or devasted to make place for the plantation
The amazonia rainforest is the source of food refuge fuels clothing and médecine for many ethnic.
Without them these people lose marks.
This déforestation threatens many indigenous peoples.
But the man is not the only one concerned because
we are estimates 27000 species or plants lost each year because of déforestation.
Not all, the global climate is also affected by déforestation.
40% of terrestrial carbon is stored un végétation and forest soils when a forest disappears, carbon which is stored up langely released into the atmosphère which increases the greehouse effect and global warming .
Déforestation destrys also soils making un productive land .
Plus to protecting the soil the forest plays an essential rôle un the water cycle, which is stock ans regulate .
If de continue déforestation of amazon rainforest, if will son be over river.

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I can't stand the deforestation especially in the amazon forest ! Did you know that 17% of the amazonian forest had been destroyed in 5 years between 2000 and 2005? This is very dangerous and is the consequence of what men create and build every single day and the main countries involved are: brazil, Colombia...and south of America.Now, there is a conflict between all theses countries about the amazonian forest.Then, why do people still destroy the this forest for their own good? Can't we let this forest live in peace as she was before ?The ravages of deforestation are enormous .Trees are cut or burned everyday while just a few plants keep appearing .Each and every year, the forests become more and more cultivated so there are less and less plants as times passes and this lead to many problems .Every years land is Rased, every Year the animals die because there is less and less resources there !But whose fault is it? It's men who cuts everything that interests them and they only care about money and business.

je m'excuse mais je retrouve des phrases mal formulees si tu peux les envoyer en francais je peux essayer de corriger le reste. Bon essaye et bon courage notamment!!!
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