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<< We admire the world through what we like >> Alphonse delamartine

Dear Diary

I'M BORED.. I'm tired of everything, my parents irritating me, OH MY GOD! They always tell me off for futile things. I can't go out after nine o'clock, I'm not allowed to stay up late and watch the tv unduly. They don't understand that I want to live my life, to them the life is summed up by << Subway, eat, sleep >>. Obviously people say that if they do that it's to protect my back, but they are overprotective. I dream of living in an other world, into a different time, with an other society. But where? And When? OMG I'VE FOUND !! At Alice in Wonderland !! Even though, hmm, no no not Alice in Wonderland, it's too ludicrous. OHH I KNOW !! I would like to live at Hogwarts, but not with the generation of Harry Potter, NO! Their time is up, I would like live with the new generation, the generation of the twenty-second century. AHH It would have been perfect. I would have been the son of Harry, and Julie and Guillaume the son and daughter of Hermionne and Ron. What an incredible group. It would have been great, we would have had lessons of sorcery, herbology, transfigurations, divination, actually the whole magic universe. We could even see the children of McGonagall, Hagrid, and evidently Malfoy' child haha. We would have done some fighting. I would have used << Avada Kevadra >> , I would have sent it in his big mouth and BAM but I'm dreaming it's not too easy. What also could have been done? Oh Yeah, we would have learned how to play to the Quidditch, we would have visited the Forbidden Forest and would have passed by the so famous passage 9 ¾. Oh my god, just thinking about this perfect makes me sad, it drives me crazy :'( Why am I in this dreadful world ? So boring and in which nothing happens. I would love to wake up a morning, open my mailbox and just see : Hogwarts school – School of Witchcraft. Maybe that one day it gonna happens. Or no haha. Anyway I'll never give up my dreams.

Sagot :

J'ai fait de petites corrections (l'anglais est ma langue maternelle) mais c'est très bien. Chapeau!

Dear Diary I'M BORED.. I'm tired of everything, my parents irritating me, OH MY GOD! They always tell me off for futile (ce mot existe en anglais mais 'petty' est mieux) things. I can't go out after nine o'clock, I'm not allowed to stay up late and watch the TV. They don't understand that I want to live my life, to them life is work, work, work (il n'y a pas de traduction directe de l'expression 'métro, boulot, dodo' - 'the rat race' est la plus proche - 'to them, work is all about the rat race'). Obviously, people say that if they do that it's to protect me, but they are overprotective. I dream of living in another world, in a different time, within another society. But where? And when? I'VE FOUND IT !! With Alice in Wonderland !! Perhaps not, hmm, no no not Alice in Wonderland, it's just too ludicrous. OHH I KNOW !! I would like to live at Hogwarts, but not with the generation of Harry Potter, NO! Their time is up, I would like to live with the new generation, the generation of the twenty-second century. It would be perfect. I would be the son of Harry, and Julie and Guillaume the son and daughter of Hermionne and Ron. What an incredible group. It would be great, we would have lessons in sorcery, herbology, transfigurations, divination; indeed, the whole magic universe. We could even see the children of McGonagall, Hagrid, and of course Malfoy's child haha. We would have fight. I would use the  << Avada Kevadra >> spell, I would have sent it in his big mouth and BAM but I'm dreaming it's not so easy. What else would we do? Oh yeah, we would learn how to play Quidditch, we would visit the Forbidden Forest and go through the famous passage 9 ¾. Oh my god, just thinking about this perfect world makes me sad, it drives me crazy :'( Why am I in this dreadful world ? So boring and in which nothing happens. I would love to wake up one morning, open my mailbox and just see : Hogwarts school – School of Witchcraft. Maybe one day it will really happen. Or perhaps not. Anyway, I'll never give up my dreams.
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