Bonjour j'ai besoin d'aide en anglais sa serais vraiment sympa svp car je suis dans la mouise la merci d'avance !!!
Voici mon texte en français et j'aimerais le mettre en anglais j'ai deja fait mais j'aimerais avoir une correction vraiment sérieuse merci d'avance !!!

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Texte en anglais:

Once upon a time, there was a girl who, after the death of her mother, finds himself with an unstable and violent father. His new wife, an immature woman, mistreats the small Cinderella during seven years. The father has never made anything to prevent him from it. One day nevertheless, he asks for the divorce and this woman commits suicide under the eyes of the girl.

Cinderella became adolescent, his alcoholic father. He makes him(her) undergo his(its) depressions and his(its) new conquest, a schizophrenic woman, for another three years. The young Cinderella tries to find some comfort somewhere else. She(it) goes out with his(her) friends, and in spite of her(its) childhood lived in the suffering, she(it) posts(shows) only smiles and joy of life(living).

A day, this second mother-in-law(stepmother) with whom she lives has it enough to offend him(it) and begins raising the hand to Cinderella. In the face of(in front of) this show(entertainment), the father reacts by committing suicide

The family climate did not calm down cendrillon stayed with his(her) horrible schizophrenic mother-in-law(stepmother). Cinderella becomes then a woman. She(it) finishes her(its) studies and spends her(its) time at her home(with her) has to do the cleaning his(her) mother-in-law(stepmother) she(it) forbade him(her) to go out but in the evening went out discreetly in discotheques(record collections) to Saint Tropez with his(her) friends but owed return before midnight so that his(her) mother-in-law(stepmother) not approvingly of nothing. Sublime dresses, fashion photos, to dress as a princess she is considered inaccessible for the boys and becomes the star of the coast(rib).

One day, a young and beautiful millionaire of Côte d'Azur(French Riviera) the remark and calls out to(questions) him(it). They see each other and eventually put(begin) themselves together officially. Cinderella complies in four for him and dedicates her days to satisfy her desires(envies), him(it) occupied

Cinderella had believed to find finally the happiness and love, but everything was suddenly transformed into nightmare. The beautiful millionaire is madly in love of her and after every blow, does not want to let her(it) leave. Today, Cinderella is imprisoned into the misfortune and does not know what to do goes back(enters her) home with a schizophrenic mother-in-law(stepmother) or a violent boyfriend just like are a father
One day, a young and beautiful millionaire of Côte d'Azur(French Riviera) the remark and calls out to(questions) him(it). They see each other and eventually put(begin) themselves together officially. Cinderella complies in four for him and dedicates her days to satisfy her desires(envies), him(it) occupied very well of her too. She(it) decided to leave hell which she lived and settled down with in sound castles, Until one day, it dares, too, to raise