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Je dois écrire un poème d'amour, j'aurais besoin d'avis et de correction. Je dois utiliser "used to" et des rimes. Merci beaucoup a ceux qui m'aiderons. Voila ce que j'ai fait:
I didn't use to believe in happiness,
my heart used to muss,
but make me to forget everything,
you, my friend for 4 years old,
you used to have, for me, a boyfriend in gold,
you used to make me happy and you used to make it like a king.

Your looks used to be my most beautiful trips,
your hands used to be my most beautiful caresses,
your mouth used to be the favorite place of my lips.
with you, I used to be a true princess.
I didn't succeed to take you out of my thoughts, you used to drove me crazy,
but I used to like me so I used to be happy.

My heart used to only about you,
I used to live in stars since you was here,
My nightmare used to finish since you was here.
I used to be a perfect relation a two.

All my nights I used to dream to be your wife.
The seventh of November, the date which changed my life.