Bonjour je dois imaginer la fin du film Barry Lyndon en anglais. Je voudrais savoir si vous pouviez m'indiquer mes erreurs et si possible les corriger.

After the duel between Redmond and Lord Bullingdon, Redmond was seriously
wounded in the leg because of the shot by his step-son, he is brought in an inn.
His surgeon told him that he must cut his leg to keep him alive. Redmond
becomes crippled. Later we can see Bullingdon, with Reverend Runt and
Graham (one of the men of Lord Bullingdon), Graham is responsible to
announce some sad news to Mrs. Barry (who, in the meantime, had gone to the
bedside of his son) and Redmond.
Graham arrives slowly to the footboard of Redmond, he sat down and accepted
a cup of tea which was proposed to him. He cleared his throat and tried to
articulate: «I came there because Lord Bullingdon sends me, I have to tell you
that now there's no way for you to attend Mrs. Lyndon and all his property.
Lord Bullingdon seems satisfied and asks you to leave the country, otherwise
you will be subject to reprisals.» And he left the room without a word. At this
moment we could see on the face of Redmond a mix between hatred, despair,
disgust and determination. He sat up as he could in his bed, and his smile
turned into a sneer. In the Lyndon’s castle, Bullingdon wrote letters of utmost
importance, his pen was scribbling on paper, and it was not long before he
lacks of ink. The clock ring 11 pm when he decided to go for the ink. He walked
in the darkness of the deep room, he passed through a long corridor and he
noticed as the sound of wood on the floor. Anxious, he turned his head and
saw a shadow. Redmond was standing in front of him, blocking his way.
Bullingdon widened his eyes and even before making a single gest, a knife was
put to his throat:
“Don’t move! Don’t scream! Or I will kill you. You're going to write a letter to
say you abandon all the charges against me. I remind you that I have let you in
life and..” but Bullingdon had already jumped on him and there was a wild
fight. Bullingdon brandished his arms and Redmond because of a defense reflex
wanted to protect and when Bullingdon fell on him, Redmond felt the knife in
the ribs of Bullingdon. After a long sigh Bullingdon collapsed on the floor, his
eyes wide open. And then, nothing. Redmond was terrified and ran away. He
rushed away the country and right now he is actively researched. As for Mrs.
Lyndon when she discovered the body of his son she found only solace in
religion with Reverend Runt. In the case of the mother of Barry we never heard
about her, or even of all the other. Fate had chosen a cruel end for all the
characters.