bonsoir est ce que quelqu'un pourrait me corriger mon dialogue merci

it's now that you come ? our 70 plan has one more time failed. we need to find a speedy solution.

you're soldier didn't let me go into your room. Glad you of my presence. I have an infaillible plan which will makes you happy.

what ? how ? when ? where ?

calm down! let's go slowly. Your talent as an hypnotist will be useful for that and me with my glaive we are going to triomph.

why will I sing? Give me more informations, more details.

I know a spell which will change your voice, make it unbearable unsustainable only for Arthur. This will unmask us.

But how this spell will kill someone? itis not a song who is going to kill Arthur !!!!

wait! it's not over.Your voice will highlight his attraction for men. And at this moment every body wil know the truth. Our job will be completed because it will be people (le peuple ) who are going to execut him and you... you as heir at law you will rise , comme to power .

OH yes! it's a brillant idea! How did we not think about this before ? We could have denounce him since many year. wait your forget that stupid Merlin is always here to foil our plans.

Wait , wait ! gently ! Did you forget me ?
Merlin like every men he can't resist me can't beat me. I wil take care of him.Don't worry! this one is for me!

finally! finally! our plan will operate since years and years Isuffer !
i will be the queen of the world!!!
he will be dead like his father and me , i'm going to be the winner!!! I'am an evil !!

but imagine , perhaps our plan will be failed again? what will you do ?

How dare you say that ? Our 71 plan will be operate! if he don't, I will be completly lost. I don't want to hear you say that again!!!