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Bonsoir Pour demain svp urgent! pouvez vous me mettre se texte au prétérit svp?

dad,
I was very impressed when I arrived to New York. It’s wonderful.
The trip lasted 2 weeks. It was uncomfortable because we travelled in the steerage and there were some bad storms. We slept in bunk beds. The food was horrible. I was sea sick.
When I arrived and saw the Statue of Liberty, I felt a rush of joy because, as you know, it was the symbol of a new start. Everyone was happy.
I have to speak to you about my new life and about what happened at Ellis-Island. Mom, like the other immigrants, had to answer many questions coming from officers as well as to pass a medical examination to be allowed to enter the country. As for me, the doctor examined me and he discovered I had a cold. He thus said to me that I couldn't leave with my mother. At that moment there, I cried and begged because I was terrified to be all alone in this strange place. When I felt better, I was allowed to enter America. On the whole, I felt sad to stay on Ellis Island
During the first weeks I sought a few rooms where I can sing. I will earn money to become a famous singer. We looked for a place to sleep and found a nice little flat. The food is not the same as in Poland but it's good. Mother works now at the beauty shop.
II will become worldly famous and I will be able to make you come to New York.
I miss you. I love you.
Your daughter

Sagot :

Nathea
bonjour/bonsoir !!! Le texte est déjà pratiquement entièrement au prétérit..... Je ne retape que ce qu'il faut "peut-être" "changer"............ :
(1ère phrase) ....................to N-Y. It was wonderful.
(3ème paragraphe) : When we arrived and saw.............of joy because, as you knew, it was the symbol.............
I had to speak
(5ème paragraphe) : During the first weeks I sought a few rooms where I could sing. I earned money to become a famous singer...The food was not the same as in Poland but it was good. Mother worked at the beauty shop. (je ne sais pas si tu dois changer le "now" ou juste l'enlever).
I became worldly famous and I was able to make you come to N-Y.
I missed you . I loved you.

Voilà, j'ai fait de mon mieux......j'espère juste que c'était bien ce qu'il fallait faire
Bye !!

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