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Bonjour pouvez-vous m'aider à corriger les fautes d'anglais car je suis sûre qu'il y en a pleins, c'est assez urgent car je vais devoir l'apprendre par cœur! merci d'avance :)

i got injured in training just days before the dance competition so I was not able to attend. I passed encourage melisse just before the competition and then I went back to my house ,I was watching a movie. So I was not present at the danse competition. When the competition over, I received a call to get the results and she told me that she had won the competition. I was very happy for her but a littel disappointed not to have been able to participate.
Later in the evening when I learned that Melissa has been poisoned in his dressing room, I was very shocked and sad.


- Oh! Maylis how are you?
- I am very stressed!
- no worry, you're the best dancer! I need you you relaxation, you'll win the competition, I trust in you!
-thank you so much you're a wonderful friend! I know I can always count on you!
-no problem, I know you would have done the same for me! good luck!
- Thank you ! Bye !
- Bye!


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i got injured in training just days before the dance competition so I was not able to attend. I passed encourage melisse just before the competition and then I went back to my house ,I was watching a movie. So I was not present at the dance competition. When the competition over, I received a call to get the results and she told me that she had won the competition. I was very happy for her but a little disappointed not to have been able to PARTICIPATE.Later in the evening when I learned that Melissa has been poisoned in his dressing room, I was very shocked and sad.- Oh! Maylis how are you?- I am very stressed!- no worry, you're the best dancer! I need you you relaxation, you'll win the competition, I trust in you!-THANK YOU so much you're a wonderful friend! I know I can always count on you!-no problem, I know you would have done the same for me! good luck!- Thank you ! Bye !- Bye!