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Quelqu'un peut-il me corriger mon devoir maison d'anglais ? Je suis en seconde ! Je remercie tous ceux qui se pencheront sur mon devoir !

April is one of my favorite months for travelling in Scotland. The weather is usually bright and sunny and the tourist season hasn't kicked off. It's a damage that Scotland is so of neglected by tourists, because they are many pretty villages to explore. When going down to this part of Scoland, I always try to fit in a visit to the little ruined chapel at the "Isle of Whithorn" and I took some spectacular pictures of the shore and his pleasure boats. It's such a lovely day cloudless and I decided to head to Edinburgh Castle. The food is good, not expensive and the local customers are courteous. The capital was looking beautiful in the spring sunshine and it was great chance to get some more photos. One of those quaint places where I would love to live is Loch Garden. This is a paradis for wildife lovers, it's feels like time has stood still ! The Loch is an expanse of water where I like to enjoy my scenery away from the crowds. Most people visit this little loch, this is a great place for looking Red squirrels, in the coniferous trees. Those Squirrels are the centre of my attention, throwing many hazelnuts on of the tourists. That's verry funny ! This is one of my favourite attractions in Scotland, this is another of Scotland's hidden corners which is full of great finds ! Look these photos ! It's marvellous !

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April is one of my favourite month to visit Scotland. The weather is bright and sunnny most of the time and the touristic season hasn't began yet. It's a pity that Scotland attracts so little tourist. There are so many  (j'ai enlevé little parce qu'un village c'est petit et que little vient d'être employé) nice  villages to dicover.
When I'm going to this "part of Scotland"(laquelle ???), I always manage to fit in a visit to that little ruined chapel of the "Isle of Withorn". I already took great pictures of this landscape, the shore and the pleasure boats. The day I decided to go to visit the Edimburgh Castle fot the first time, it was a lovely cloudless day. The capital looked  splendid on that spring's sun. A chance for me ! The light was so nice I could take again really nice pictures.
There's a quaint place where I'd love to live in. It's the "Loch Garten" in the national Park of Cairgorms. (oops check l'orthographe j'arrive pas à me relire ! sinon je le ferai juste après).The loch is an expanse of water where I like being away from the crowd, just enjoying the landscape. It's a real paradise for nature lovers. It looks as if time has just stopped.Tourists go there during the osprey's time reproduction. There are also many red squirrels. I'm fond of them. It's fun to play with them and  I always throw hazelnuts in their direction !t (c'est les écureils qui lancent des noisettes ou on leur en jete...???). It's really my favourite place in Scotland , but there are so many others nice hidden places/corners to discover.
The food is really tasty/quite good and local people are very friendly.
Have a look to all thes pictures and see how wonderful it is !

J'ai fait de mon mieux.....; Vérifie la phrase when I'm going to this part of Scotland....on ne sait pas laquelle ...précise, ça sera mieux.

J'espère être reté fidèle à ton texte et que ça te plaira

Bonne soirée et bon courage pour la reprise des cours !    :)

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