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Voila j'ai terminé ma tâche finale y a t'il des erreurs svp aidez moi Merci d'avance
I arrived at the school at 6 a.m and the bus wasn't still there. It arrived late. When the bus had finally arrived we got on the bus and we showed our identity cards . When everibody was in the bus we left , along the way we changed driver during the way. I listened music and I slept.On the border we have of to present our identity cards. After we got on the bus and we went to a small shopping mall where we exchanged our currency. At 9:33 a.m it was the hour of the shuttle.We returned into the shuttle altough we had to wait 35 minuts before arriving in England. But we had to continue the roard to arrive at the museum, on the way I saw full monuments , of buses and typically English taxis. When we arrived at the museum we were divided into 2 groups, those who went in toilet and those who were going to eat. I ate grated carrotand sandwich with yoghurt.We were 5, there was Sarah, Lilou, Athena, Chloé and me. As soon as we stopped eating Mne Bouclet gave us the map of the museum and the forms which necessary to fill to have points. Then we were divided into 2 groups according to the alphabetical order. A man searched our bags verify that there were no weapons.Once he have verify our bags he has we to let bring in.The teachers one suggest going in toilets and they one waited. When everybody was ready we began the visit of the museum.In the ceiling we could see war planes. We visited several floors where we saw statues and piece of the Berlin Wall. To the museum, I prefered the Berlin Wall, it really impressed me because it's very important in the history. The museum was very big it was impressive.We stayed 3 hours in this museum. After, the ended visit everybody had gone out but I got lost in the museum and I have of to go outside to find my group. Then we are to go back up in the bus. In the bus I laughed whith my friends. The way was long because we went towards the shopping mall witch was situaded near the shuttle. At the end of one hour of roard we arrived at the shopping mall. Once lowered from the bus Mrs Bouclet gave us the map of the shopping mall and cards of promotions. Later we all run away because we had only1 hour for the shopping and there were many stores. I went to Abercrombie and Superdry. I bought two T-shirts from Abercrombie , one T shirt from Superdry and one case. At 6:30 pm all the world was in the bus then Chloe and me we returned to the bus with the others.
It was necessary 30 minuts of roard to return to the shuttle and once to the shuttle 35 minuts late we were in France. In 22:30 we arrived in school and our parents are come to find us. I adored this day because it was really great and I never was to go to London.
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Sagot :

1er ligne: I arrived at school ..... and the bus wasn't there yet.
3e ligne: ...everybody was in the bus, we left along the way.
4e ligne: in the border ( si sa veut dire frontière)line , we had to present our identity card.
6e ligne: hour for the shuttle.we returned with the shuttle...
7e ligne:continue the ride
8e :lot of monuments
10e:to the washroom
12e:which was necessary
14e:a man took a look in our bag in case we brought any weapons

ce n'est pas tout dis le moi si t'as besoin de plus d'aide et fais gaffe à la ponctuation et aux fautes d'orthographe!
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